Potions and Snitches
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Title: The Broken Lantern 21 May 2012 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! Now Dumbledore believes him! *facepalm*

    I really enjoyed the image of Trelawny attempting to read her colleagues' tea leaves. It was a nice light moment to break up the gloom and doom. Ah! But what a way to bring us back with Snape stalking Quirrel!

    I'm totally loving this story!

    Author's Response: Haha, yes I think a good old facepalm sums up Dumbledore's sudden willingness to believe Snape! I had a lot of fun with Trelawney and her little tea leaf reading episode. I'm very glad you are loving this story. I am loving your responses!
Title: The Broken Lantern 21 May 2012 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter but try breaking up some of the longer paragraph for clarity's sake.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the advice!
Title: The Broken Lantern 21 May 2012 3:15 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how long it will take the staff to realize that Severus is missing? With his broken ankle, it won't be easy for him to escape without his wand. I am looking forward to learning more about these strange werewolves.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I rather think it would be difficult for the staff to notice Snape gone. I sort of think he has the tendency to dissapear brewing, or something like that.

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