Reviews For The Dark One's Apprentice
You are a talented storyteller and I hope that you grace us with more of your work soon.
Bravi, bravi, bravissimi!
I'm glad you liked it. I know I have issues with pronouns and my betas and I attempt to catch them, some slip away. Either way, I'm glad you liked it and, yes, you will probably be seeing more soon.
I also like the honorary snake deal and how Severus treats Harry as his apprentice. Maybe you could write some small sequels about Harry and Severus coming to know each other better--like in those scenes you mentioned where Harry was fighting with Severus.
How will this affect Harry when it comes time to fight Voldy?
You know something else I've noticed? Nowhere in POA does it mention that after Snape got knocked out if he was injured or not. Or the fact that he didn't tell on the three for attacking him. I've always wondered if he gave them some kind of punishment for knocking him out though.
I'm glad you liked it. To answer your question, yes I probably will. I got a few other things to work on first, but there will probably be some thing to follow this story up with since I left myself wiggle room. Perhaps we should strike a deal? Do terms and everything?
Sorry I'm in a goofy mood.
I have no clue how it will affect the fight with Voldy yet. I know he isn't one of the Lady's or even the original Dark Lord's followers (have any guesses to that one, my friend?)
I'd believe that because why would Harry in the books (or the movies) ever care that Severus got hurt until the end? Plus when have we ever seen Dumbles actually seem to care truly about Sev's well being? He basically told Sev his soul was not worth saving with his comments that occurred during HBP but we finally hear in TDH. So I'm going to say nothing and add to the bitterness. Unless... Remus' job was the punishment depending on if that was out of pure revenge/vindiction or not.
I would also love to see Hermione taking an apprenticeship too. :D
I did have one question though - is Harry Severus' son here - or is he just an unrequited love's son, as you mentioned above? I wasn't sure, because you mentioned that, and then it almost read as if Harry was his son. Sorry for being confused.
Hugs and Love,
Maybe one day I'll write a sequel... but not for a while. You will probably see Harry doing better at Potions and see some of Hermione's apprenticeship as well.
Harry is not Severus' son, he is James' and Lily's son. I think by the end of the story Severus and Harry are thinking of themselves as father and son. I can understand the confusion, since you are seeing their history as flashbacks and a lot of information is missing (probably because I knew I'd do a a sequel eventually and needed room to play!)
Thanks for your review!
Glad you like it! Probably, but not until I get caught up with a few of my other stories.
Thanks for the review!
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