Nice bit of excitement at the start of the story, but Harry really comes across as a mouthy brat. Maybe Snape should just have silenced him! But, they have come to an understanding, which must be good.
A bit OC, but a nice quarrel
The last paragraph might need some editing. I like this story
I'm glad that Harry finally pushed through it and apologized to Snape for the awful things he said. Personally, I think Snape could stand to apologize a little more, too. They both acted atrociously, but I'm glad that they're on speaking terms now.
Great job, and thank you for sharing this fic with us! =)
Ah! No! I had hope for these two at the end of the last chapter, but this has completely crushed that. At least Snape realized what he was doing before the damage became irreparable. I hope they can work through this in the next chapter!
Hm, Snape played Quidditch back in the day? His last game would explain the hooked nose, lol. Off to an interesting start!
Title: Chapter 3
| 30 May 2012 9:46 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good piece thank you
interesting a sequil please
Good story, I hope in this world Snape's life does not end so horribly.
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