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Reviews For Learning to Trust
Title: Chapter 3 31 May 2012 10:05 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice bit of excitement at the start of the story, but Harry really comes across as a mouthy brat. Maybe Snape should just have silenced him! But, they have come to an understanding, which must be good.
Title: Chapter 3 31 May 2012 3:36 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for sharing
Title: Chapter 2 31 May 2012 3:31 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    A bit OC, but a nice quarrel
Title: Chapter 1 31 May 2012 3:27 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    The last paragraph might need some editing. I like this story
Title: Chapter 3 31 May 2012 12:19 am
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry finally pushed through it and apologized to Snape for the awful things he said. Personally, I think Snape could stand to apologize a little more, too. They both acted atrociously, but I'm glad that they're on speaking terms now.

    Great job, and thank you for sharing this fic with us! =)
Title: Chapter 2 31 May 2012 12:04 am
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! No! I had hope for these two at the end of the last chapter, but this has completely crushed that. At least Snape realized what he was doing before the damage became irreparable. I hope they can work through this in the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 1 30 May 2012 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm, Snape played Quidditch back in the day? His last game would explain the hooked nose, lol. Off to an interesting start!
Title: Chapter 3 30 May 2012 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good piece thank you
Title: Chapter 3 28 May 2012 11:16 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting a sequil please
Title: Chapter 3 28 May 2012 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story, I hope in this world Snape's life does not end so horribly.

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