Title: Fireflies from the Heart
| 04 Jun 2012 4:03 am
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Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Very cool. I really liked little Harry and was sad to discover he wasn't 'real'. It was great how you managed to write such a non-canon story and still fit it into canon. Well done!
I absolutely LOVED this. You made me cry at the end, for sure. Congratulations on such a wonderful story!!
Great story! I really enjoyed it, and although you know that I am one for Harry and Severus living happily ever after, I must admit that I did really enjoy this one with its little twisty tales...you are an excellent writer, and I am super proud to be your beta:) Great job!
Title: Fireflies from the Heart
| 01 Jun 2012 9:45 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story I loved this Harry and the way you portrayed their relationship thank you
Title: Fireflies from the Heart
| 31 May 2012 10:22 pm
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Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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It was obvious from the start that this would not have the happy ending I might wish for, but I couldn't stop reading anyway. Great description of Snape just existing, and a lovely way to give him a purpose in life. Sad but beautiful.
Title: Fireflies from the Heart
| 31 May 2012 6:52 pm
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Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
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Wow...I don't know if you meant for it to be a little creepy, because I'm reading this at night and yeah...It's a great story, though, a tribute of some sort, I would like to think.
This was so sad but beautifully well done very well done...
This is a stunningly beautiful story. I cried at the end. I always thought through the books that Severus was an achingly lonely man. Part of the cut scene showed him waiting for Dumbledore to return to the castle with Harry and then he was going to have to kill his friend and mentor. The acting was wonderful. Your work caught that loneliness and showed how that small time of love made such a difference.
Wow! Very interesting fic and addictive storytelling. Nicely done! And thanks so much for submitting it for the fic fest!
*tosses handfuls of cookies*
Wonderful story. I never guessed at the ending, even for a moment.
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