That was beautiful! You made me cry, you meanie! I loved how you portrayed Severus' emotions at the start and when he cried... It was perfect:)
My, that was lovely. What an wonderful, unique idea! This story was so beautifully melancholy, and struck a chord with me in many ways. Severus' sadness was very well described. So often people do lack the will to keep going, but continue out of the expectation others place upon them. I also liked the subtle hints at what was really going on, as well as the way you portrayed Snape's character. It was quite refreshing. Thanks for a wonderful story watercrystals!
| Title: Fireflies from the Heart
| 29 May 2012 11:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Beautiful story :) Thank you for writing it!
I didnt realize I was reading a story with a not so happy ending..It was good of course...but I'm a bit sad now lol
| Title: Fireflies from the Heart
| 29 May 2012 8:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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That was beautiful WAter Crystals!
I loved the emotion and the meaning behind the fireflies.
Very well done. Little Harry was able to give Snape purpose in life and melt the man's cold heart.
I...wow. This is a very thought provoking story. Its a roller coaster ride of emotions....
I think this is a very beautiful and bitter sweet story.
I like it!
| Title: Fireflies from the Heart
| 29 May 2012 6:57 pm
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| Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed)
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Wonderful story. Great job
Excuse my while I go and sob my little heart out.
Aww, wow. Not typically the type of story I would read, but you are of course brilliant, so I'd read probably anything from you. Now the ending was sad of course, and I wish there was more to the story; but, I still like how you left the ending of the books and just re-worked it to fit your story.
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