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Title: Riddling Out The Truth 22 Jun 2021 12:46 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story but it's just... or doesn't*feel* quite right
    ...I mean theres no hostility between snape and harry, more like a cold war than the vitriol spewing bastard snape usually is to harry. I get hes being on his best behavior in front of joanna but why is harry just going along then? I mean he could've asked to floo the weasleys the first day. Or to stay at grimmauld alone; snape certainly would let him if it meant being free of him. Nor trying to bash or flame anything I swear. I just get this lukewarm feeling sheen I'm so used to their relationship running hot (mutual hatred hot I mean)
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 19 Apr 2013 2:58 am
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is just too mean.
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 29 Jul 2012 10:36 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Like this story a lot but why is Sam going as well
    ? He doesn't have issues with Snape and seems to love his mum.
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 29 Jul 2012 10:36 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Like this story a lot but why is Sam going as well
    ? He doesn't have issues with Snape and seems to love his mum.
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 27 Jul 2012 10:34 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha! I love this new friend of Harry's. Looks like Snape messed up big time.
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 09 Jul 2012 9:36 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent again. And I'm glad you have new chapters planned out so we don't have to wait very long for them.
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 08 Jul 2012 2:15 pm
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    Yikes! I'm surprised that Harry threw the first punch, but I can understand it with all the stress he's under. And ugh! Snape is being so cruel to him. Poor Harry. :(
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 07 Jul 2012 4:42 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry just can't seem to catch a break with Snape. I'm surprised that Joanna hasn't insisted that Harry stay since his family abandoned him. Joanna and Sam are interesting characters and I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Title: Riddling Out The Truth 06 Jul 2012 10:31 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    This is AMAZING!! It's unlike anything I've read before. How did you think of such an awesome idea? Joanna sounds really nice and it's nice to know that Snape is trying to make an effort with Sam. I really like the dialogue between Harry and Sam too. It sounds so natural, like they've known each other for years. I'm so excited to see where you take this:) This is awesome!!

    Author's Response:

    It's been in my head in one form or another for awhile.  I've started a cpl stories where Snape gets Harry out of jail but they didn't stick with me.  This one has some loose basis off of "The OC" a tv show I used to watch in High school.  Troubled teen steals a car and gets thrown in jail, good public attourney gets him out and offers to help him.  Kid gets kicked out of his house by lousy drunk mom and does accept the attourneys help and then has to figure out how to integrate into this wealthy upper class family.  What I took from that show is Harry getting taken in by Snape (who in this case has issues of his own trying to hold together his own life with his new family), as well as Harry returning home to find everything gone.  Other than that the rest just came to me.  I know this story doesn't have a lot of angst, but where this story is going just feels... right to me.  I can't yet recall feeling right about where a story is going, even if they turn out good in the end.  I've pretty well got planned out where they're going from here.  I don't usually write too much that the characters wouldn't already be doing.  To me I put them in a situation and then they take it from there and I'm just writing to keep up with them and how they're feeling, what they're saying etc.  Hope that helps.

    Thanks for the awesome review!

Title: Riddling Out The Truth 06 Jul 2012 8:37 am
Reviewer: Chicago Myth (Signed) [Report This]
    amazing!!!! Please update soon. I love Sam. Very different from ron and hermione but exactly who harry needs right now.

    Author's Response: Like (just because I wish there was a like button on comments lol).

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