Ha! I knew he would be eavesdropping. I like this story.
Interesting so far. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Interesting so far. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
The plot development in the chapter was really good. You said it's not edited yet so I won't mention anything about that. I'm working on my punctuation and grammar (also spelling) a bit so I was surprised when I recognized a few mistakes. I'm really enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, I edit as I go, and I hardly ever go back and edit what I've written if it's just fan fiction, mostly because people are asking for immediate updates, and once it's updated I'm off writing the next chapter already. Sorry about any grammar mistakes you may have seen. I think most of my chapters have at least one, but hopefully not more than three.
I really like this story! More soon?
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| 29 Jul 2012 11:07 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter pleases update soon if you can
So glad Harry told Sam how he feels about his complaining! :)
I am very glad that Harry spoke out like he did as it might be good for both Sam and Severus. Sam might get a new perspective about Snape, and Severus just might see how alone Harry really is.
Wow! I'm so glad that Snape heard that conversation. Great chapter JA.
I love how Harry defended Snape and Harry realised that Snape is always saving him, just him.
Can't wait for the NEXT update! (hint hint)
Oh, poor Harry! I am glad that he finally got to express himself about his feelings though. I wonder if Snape will now start to treat him different? Or at least look or think about him different. He has got to realize how unloved and unwanted Harry is.. at least when it comes to family. He has friends, but no real family. Maybe his outburst will make Sam think differently.
Great chapter and great story! Thanks for writing, sharing, and updating! I enjoyed it.
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