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Title: Past and Present 19 Apr 2013 9:25 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Story is perfect so far.
Title: Past and Present 12 Sep 2012 6:15 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    What about Harry's b-day?
Title: Past and Present 05 Sep 2012 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter thank you. I love the angst and the way the adults are blundering along not really helping. Thank you
Title: Past and Present 04 Sep 2012 1:45 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great update JA. I'm glad that Jo and Snape are there for Harry, even if Harry is fighting them a little right now.

    Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Title: Past and Present 03 Sep 2012 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This is just angst galore isn't it! Poor Harry, people keep misunderstanding him and this in turn, causes even more of a problem for him. Poor Harry :( Please update again soon!
Title: Past and Present 03 Sep 2012 3:17 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    (I was asked by Donna to pass this along as she couldn't post without an account)

    I just found this and read everything at once. I really should be
    doing a million other things, but I just couldn't stop! The story is
    very engaging and substantive. I feel like each character is unique,
    complex, growing, and reacting reasonably- something very unusual for
    fanfic. Great job!
    I feel so bad for Harry, but he's got a lot of issues to work through
    before he can just run up and accept his place in this family. It is
    very interesting to see him next to Sam. Sam's obviously got his own
    feelings to sort through regarding Jo and Snape, but Sam is still
    understands that he is entitled to parents. It is very easy to see
    the differences between the two.

    I think that Harry is right to be suspicious of Jo. Seriously, this
    woman does the 'You're welcome any time, Harry!' thing and then kicks
    him out on his ass the first time she heard him say something mean?
    What in God's name is wrong with this woman? Jo can clean Harry up
    after fights, feed him, hug him, and smile at him all she wants- but
    none of it will matter because she can turn around and throw them out
    in a second. She has shown that her kindness and generosity are not
    based in concern or appreciation for Harry, so now all of it is
    meaningless.
    Besides- what if Sam hadn't provoked Harry? What if Harry lost
    control of his emotions and lashed out at Sam simply because he was he
    was there? That behavior would be consistent with that of typical
    teenagers and even more so with victims of abuse. Is Jo going to
    decide he's not worth it to have around every time Harry's feelings
    get jumbled or he doesn't behave sweetly? At least the Dursleys never
    tricked Harry into thinking they cared. Jo has a lot of explaining
    and a lot of growth to do before I'll warm to her again. When Snape
    chose Harry over that horrible woman I cheered. Even if at that
    moment James and Lily rose from the dead and took Harry to a loving
    home, I think Snape should have left. Who would want to be around
    somebody so callous that she could offer a loving home to an abused
    orphan and then rip it away knowing the pain it would cause? The sex
    must have been great AND Jo must have explained something we don't yet
    know, because I can't see Snape bringing Harry back to her to be hurt
    again.

    I also think Sam was right to be suspicious of Snape. Sam thinks that
    Snape is only interested in him to please Jo. From what we've seen in
    the Snape POV portions, that is entirely accurate. I think that since
    Harry pointed out Sam's suspicions, Snape has become aware of this and
    intentionally interacted with Sam as an individual, not simply as
    'Jo's son.' You can see that Snape isn't quite used to his whole
    family thing either. He is constantly evolving and changing.
    I really love how Snape, even though he's in a cute house with a cute
    girlfriend and a cute couple of kids, is still Snape. His personality
    hasn't been erased- it has just become more complex.

    I love this story and I love how it is written. I can't wait to see
    more. Great work!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review Donna.  It's fun sometimes to have the characters and storyline be analyzed by others.  It gives me insight into what the readers are feeling and sometimes gives me new things to write about.  What I've heard several times over now is that readers are mad at Jo and think she's a bit evil.  Let me explain a little more in depth here just to clarify for anyone who feels this way about Jo:

    1) At the point when Jo had kicked Harry out, she did not know he had been abused, only that his family (for some unknown reason) had left him by himself.  She wasn't thinking about the harm she would cause Harry by asking him to leave because she did not know it would cause him harm.

    2) Joanna is a single parent who has lost her husband and two other family members.  All she has left is Sam and his cousin Jason.  If that wouldn't be enough to make her an overprotective mother, we've also got to look at the fact that mothers in general just want to protect their chilidren, and will always put their children first (even over step fathers and other family members... unless they just don't care about their kids).  On top of that, we know already that Sam has had issues being picked on, bullied, taunted, and beaten up by bullies in the neighborhood in the past and on multiple occasions.

    When I wrote that portion of the story, these were the two things on my mind.  Jo did not kick Harry out because she's a bad person, and she didn't do it because she's mean.  She did it for the sole reason that she walked in to hear someone being mean to her son, a son she feels a deep need to protect from anything that might hurt him.  Sam has lost a lot too losing his dad and aunt and uncle, and to have people sitting there telling him that they hate him, or to say other rude things... it was enough to make Jo snap, and try to remove any person who is doing anything she perceives as 'harmful' to her son.  She was also feeling a bit betrayed, to have a guest she'd welcomed into her home, someone her son had become good friends with, turn around and say something she perceived to be so harmful to her only child.

    That being said, it's unfortunate that Harry already had abandonment issues at that point, and so her kicking him out just brings up the same old issues in new ways for Harry (more angst for me to write about), but none of this was her intentions.  I cannot say as a mother, that if a guest (whoever that might be) were taunting or being mean to my daughter, that I would not also tell them that they are no longer welcome in my home.  I don't care if it's a family member or a friend, if someone comes into my home and hurts my daughter in any way, they're going to be forced to leave, even if it will hurt their feelings.  But again, Jo wasn't even thinking of Harry's feelings, only of protecting her son.

    I hope this clears things up for readers.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Past and Present 02 Sep 2012 5:14 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I especially like the dynamics of this story. It's nice to read something where Snape has an active relationship with a woman and is trying to develop a relationship with her son. Harry is a nice foil because he so desparately wants what Sam has and takes for granted. It would be nice to see Harry become part of this family and believe that he is part of it though there will be a lot of angst before that happens. The other problem is Severus' death-eater background. How can he safely adopt The-Boy-Who-Lived?
Title: Past and Present 02 Sep 2012 4:20 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't like that Draco has him doubting himself. I don't like that he won't open up to Sev and Jo.
Title: Past and Present 01 Sep 2012 1:47 am
Reviewer: missyanne (Signed) [Report This]
    I just read all nine chapters in one go, and I must say that I love this story. You do have a few basic comma issues and some typos, but those are easily overlooked by the overall quality of your writing.

    Both of your OCs are realistic and I love how Harry sees Severus as a human being. This really is a very touching story and I can't wait for more. I'll be right there with Kai, pestering you to update.
Title: Past and Present 01 Sep 2012 1:28 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    ohhh. You are so mean sometimes. Now what'll happen?

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