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Title: Fix This 30 Jul 2012 11:08 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm shaking my head in awe. This was an excellent story. It really was, and that's a rare thing. Are you planning a sequel? I would love to see this relationship develop. Truly well done story!
Title: Fix This 27 Jul 2012 1:37 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sweet...I had been avoiding it..beause of the title..and the character death mark..i'm am however glad I read it :)
Title: Fix This 26 Jul 2012 7:59 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesomesauce!!!
Title: Fix This 24 Jul 2012 4:05 am
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the Haunting in the first part of the story. I could imagine Harry finally putting the Marauders' pranking skills to use.
Title: Fix This 24 Jul 2012 2:34 am
Reviewer: anathi (Signed) [Report This]
    So clever! I hope you have a lot of dishes to wash in the future.

    Loved the phoenix analogy.

    It would be interesting to include the scene of Harry's "death", and other scenes that show the status of his relationship with Snape just before he died.

    Also, what did Harry mean by saying Snape was "the only one who loved--"?

    Great writing, and I hope you publish that novel some day, and tell us about it so we can read it!

    Author's Response:

    There was no meaning when Harry said Snape was the only one who loved... it was Harry trying to be a jerk to Snape when he woke him up every morning at 5 am, because Harry knew full well that Snape hated him.

     

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Fix This 23 Jul 2012 5:44 pm
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. My. Goodness. Perfect! If I could give you a million frogs I would:)
Title: Fix This 23 Jul 2012 1:09 pm
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    love it. So tragic to think of a little boy ghost and a nice play on the prophecy. Really, I could've read thirty chapters of it. I wondered at the significance of the schedule and wanted more details on his ghostly life. Great idea.

    Author's Response: Harry becoming a creature of habit was to give himself some stability during his time of trauma.  Children in general thrive better with a schedule to follow, and Harry gave himself one by sticking to a routine of things he felt he needed to do, like going to classes to feel normal, looking for his body at night, following Ginny, and waking Albus and Severus early in the morning for comfort.  It was also to show a change in the story when Harry suddenly breaks the schedule, to show that he has changed and that something is wrong.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Fix This 23 Jul 2012 1:49 am
Reviewer: Sasulia (Signed) [Report This]
    My heart was breaking for Harry while reading this, despite the funny moments (which I loved too). By the end of the story however, my heart, much like Harry, was definitely fixed (though with a few lingering aches and pains)! Loved it, it was amazing.
Title: Fix This 23 Jul 2012 1:07 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. I loved the 5am waking typical Harry! Thank you so much.
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed it a lot, thank you!

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