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Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 11:03 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful one-shot! I can't believe the range of emotions you managed to evoke in a relatively short piece, and, as a bonus, you delivered the perfect ending for me. Thank you!

    Author's Response: You're welcome! :)
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 7:07 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very good!
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 6:18 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, not the story I wanted updated...but it was still awesome! It was funny to sad, to happy. Haha. Cute story!
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this was definitely a very unique take on Voldemort's demise and the prophecy! I enjoyed it very much, especially the beginning - it was funny and bittersweet at the same time, a combination I like very much. I'm glad things turned out as they did; Lucius' appreciation of Voldemort's death was a nice touch.
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 5:24 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for a great story! Excellent! Excellent! I have to say, I think it is a masterpiece. :) Sequel please?

    Here's Honeydukes chocolate to tempt you with... :P

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 1:43 pm
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was such a good idea for a story! Loved it :)
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 11:27 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice very nice in deed I loked how you had harry not give up Bravo.
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 10:01 am
Reviewer: EmmalynnLilliannaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this story! It could be cool if you stretched it out into a multiple chapter short story, too. Just adding more details about how Harry "died" in the first place, his friends' thoughts and feelings about him being a ghost, and especially the scene where Voldemort dies. I got confused about what was happening there... But it's still a very good one-shot! Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, sorry that the Voldemort scene was confusing.  I meant it to be a little strange because Snape himself was confused and it was through his eyes at that point.  I was trying to portray utter chaos.

    Thanks for your review!

Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 8:49 am
Reviewer: Chicago Myth (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome!!!!
Title: Fix This 22 Jul 2012 8:34 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    he's not dead he's not dead! WHEEEEE

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