I really liked this story! It could be cool if you stretched it out into a multiple chapter short story, too. Just adding more details about how Harry "died" in the first place, his friends' thoughts and feelings about him being a ghost, and especially the scene where Voldemort dies. I got confused about what was happening there... But it's still a very good one-shot! Great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry that the Voldemort scene was confusing. I meant it to be a little strange because Snape himself was confused and it was through his eyes at that point. I was trying to portray utter chaos.
Thanks for your review!