I LOVED IT!!!! :-D
This is going on my favorites. Well done!
This. is. so-freakin-awesome! It's wonderfully original and you did an excellent job of portraying Harry's longing for life, even when the scenes were seemingly lighthearted. I'm glad that Harry found himself in the end, because the thought of him continuing on as he was, was a tragic one. Seriously, this story is so going on my list of favorites.
That is one of the best, if not the best story I have ever read!! Have you ever considered writing for a living? I'd buy your books if they were even half as good as this was. Brilliant!!!
Author's Response: I've wanted to write novels for a living since I was in highschool! I'm currently working on one :) Thanks for your support!
This was really incredible, JA. It is one of the best one-shots I've ever read.
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| 22 Jul 2012 3:52 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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SO GOOD JA~
Definitely one of your best stories, and I love the potential plot you could write with it. Maybe, if you aren't continuing, you could write stories in this universe? Perhaps about some of Harry's antics around the castle?
Author's Response: Lol, there was a lot of potential for him to cause trouble wasn't there, but in the end I had to pick just a few things for him to do (particularly I knew he needed to pester Snape) and then move on to his other issues. Thanks for the review!
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