Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Return to Sender
Title: Chapter 2 13 Aug 2012 5:22 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Once again, amazing details of Harry's early life with the Dursleys. I especially liked the magically-refilling bottle!
Title: Chapter 1 13 Aug 2012 5:17 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the detailed description of Godric's Hollow, as well as the encounter between Voldemort and the Potters-- you've done an excellent job of filling in some blanks in canon, showing us "the rest of the story" of that fateful night. Terrific opening to your story!
Title: Chapter 14 13 Aug 2012 4:57 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm...really interesting so far. Curious to see what they'll have to talk about and why Lucius was behind the whole gift/letter thing. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 14 13 Aug 2012 4:19 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow good story.. well done

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 8 13 Aug 2012 3:48 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry learns to trust soon! And doesn't have too large of a breakdown when he realizes he isn't going back to the Dursleys, ever.
Title: Chapter 6 13 Aug 2012 3:33 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think Harry will take well to being passed on from person to person. Poor little guy :(
Title: Chapter 5 13 Aug 2012 3:25 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh little Harry, he definitely is in desperate need of a hug. Hope to see Snape come around soon.
Title: Chapter 3 13 Aug 2012 3:12 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooo poor Harry! And poor Snape! Azkaban is definitely not a nice place to stay...even if it was for 3 months!
Title: Chapter 2 13 Aug 2012 2:49 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah, large space at the end again haha
    Really liked this chapter. Good representation of both Petunia and Vernon.
Title: Chapter 1 13 Aug 2012 2:42 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...interesting start. There seem to be some formatting issues on this chapter, but it's probably having to do with P&S. It's easily fixable by going into your story and editing out the extra spaces. Also the code r12 shows up a couple of times.

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