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Title: Dear Evelyn 20 Dec 2012 7:48 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I guessed it was his memories of Lily making him avoid Harry.
    But so the powder they tried to leave her ended up returning with them, right? Rather sucky, to be sure, but hey, if she came back with them already, the story might just end, I suppose, right? ;-)

    Author's Response: Yes, the powder carries the magic to take things through time, and it slowly absorbs intp whaever it's touching. The phial will have absorbed all the magic, so she cannot get to it. Thanks so much for the review cckeimig!
Title: Dear Evelyn 20 Dec 2012 6:37 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmmm...I guess I fall into that catagory...I'm
    irritated and pissed and...whoo..

    I was gonna not comment out of spite lol, but I'm above that kinda :p

    I figured that was the reason, it was always because he looked like James.. I'm kinda sad right now...

    Author's Response: Well, thanks for the review! Sorry you're so annoyed. On another note, did you say that you are under the impression Snape ignored Harry because he looked like James? Maybe I've misinterpreted your review, but just to be clear, it was because Harry reminded him of Lily and it made him miss her so much. Anyway, thanks!
Title: Burn it Down 15 Dec 2012 11:14 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    What a place to stop! Evelyn HAS to make it back. Well they all do.
    Slight grumble at cliffhanger over, that was a long chapter with lots in it, but there was no way I was going to stop reading part way through. Very entertaining, although lets hope it was only the bad guys who got roasted.
    Looking forward to finding out how Snape and Harry get on when/if things calm down and they get to talk.

    Author's Response: Yeah, quite a place to stop. Thanks so much for the feedback rosina! Glad you found it entertaining. I too am rather looking forward to the slightly calmer chapters. I have to admit, I find some of them tense even while editing!
Title: Burn it Down 14 Dec 2012 7:50 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome and exciting and all sorts of happy, impressed words like those. Can't WAIT for the next bit!!!

    Author's Response: Haha, I like how you worded that. Thanks for the review!
Title: Burn it Down 14 Dec 2012 3:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    You're killing me Whitetail!!!

    Okay, so Snape had better be okay!!

    My nerves are on the edge of my seat!

    Okay, great chapter of course, but please update soon.

    Author's Response: I promise, barring disaster, that I will have the next chapter up on Thursday, as I usually do! Thank you so much for the review Pandora, and sorry you're metaphorically dying over this! 
Title: Burn it Down 14 Dec 2012 2:18 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, what an exciting chapter! The fire and cave-in had me on the edge of my seat. I was glad that Harry warned Mr. Peake. He deserved a break. Now if only Evelyn makes it back in time to return with Harry and Snape. They are both badly hurt and will need someone to get help when they return. I hope Evelyn will be there.

    Author's Response: Yes, let us hope that Evelyn hurries! Harry and Snape are in pretty rough shape, that's for sure. Thanks so much for the feedback!
Title: Burn it Down 14 Dec 2012 2:10 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    *Gives Whitetail the famous Snape Glare*

    You really like to torture us huh? I finally was able to breathe because Harry was safe and now poor Sev is fighting for his life and Evelyn's fate is also up in the air.

    While I lay panting hear from trying to catch my breath I thought I should tell you it was an awesome chapter and you're a great writer.

    Can't wait until the next update...Happy Holidays :)

    Author's Response: Ouch, I thought I felt something smouldering. Try to aim that glare somewehre besides my hair, will you? Yeah, I am rather enjoying myself here, as cruel as it sounds. But hey, at least I know I've done my job as a writer and gotten the readers invested in the characters! *dodges another fiery glare*. Thank you very much for your comments (although my nhair could have done without that boiling hot look!). Hope you enjoy the Chrismas Holidays as well!
Title: Hope Springs Eternal 07 Dec 2012 11:47 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting to hear Evelyn's story, and it's good that she and Severus can go forward without any big secrets. I wonder what she will make of life in the c20th.(Yes, I know I'm making assumptions..). Next chapter sounds exciting, here's hoping the plan works and that they manage to rescue Harry in time.

    Author's Response: Yes, let us hope Harry is rescued on time! Yikes. Thank so much for the feedback rosina!
Title: Hope Springs Eternal 07 Dec 2012 5:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, poor Severus. I'm glad that Evelyn forgave him though. I'm so worried about Harry!

    I can't wait for the next chapter. You've left me on the edge of my seat again. Great chapter as usual.

    Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it Pandora! I can't wait for the next chapter too!
Title: Hope Springs Eternal 07 Dec 2012 2:02 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Yaa, Evelyn wants to come back with Severus and Harry. I hope she will be able to. I liked the chapter. The backstory was interesting and certainly reflects the devastating illnesses that swept countries in that period. Certainly a lot different from now. Evelyn will have a real eyeopener when she comes to Hogwarts of Sev and Harry's time.

    Author's Response: Ah yes, Harry and Severus come from a very different time than Evelyn, that is for sure! Thanks so much for the review bridgeportfox!

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