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Title: Hope Springs Eternal 07 Dec 2012 1:00 am
Reviewer: Manfredd (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this chapter, and how you incorporated Evenlyn's backstory.

    Author's Response: I am relieved you liked it! Thanks for the review Manfredd!
Title: Hope Springs Eternal 07 Dec 2012 12:30 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    *is on the verge of passing out...and she sees the light*

    Psh..studying for finals...abandoning said studying for an updated story..isn't gonna help in the long run lol

    This part...chapter was sad..because Evelyn also has had love lost like Severus, it was a sweet how she told him she accepted him for who he was and not the choices he made.

    I'm still worried about Harry, but I'm hanging on for next chapter. Wondering who was Harry hearing. Was it all in his head or was an actual person..I can't see it being his mentor as the man was afraid of crossing them, but who knows.

    I liked this chapter, but I'm really looking forward to the next one :)

    Author's Response: Ah yes, feverish Harry ... was he hallucinating? (cough cough .... flash of red, who has red hair? cough, hint!) Glad you liked Evelyn's story. I was quite worried about that, so it is a relief that someone liked it. Thanks so much for the review!
Title: A Grim Realization 30 Nov 2012 1:50 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. It sounds like Severus and Evelyn have made it through just in time. They both seem to be done in themselves though so it was good that Evelyn made Snape hold back. I forgot that Harry hadn't mentioned the childrens' bodies so that must have been a nasty shock for our tunnelers. I know that I an excited to find out what happens when they break in.

    Author's Response: A shock indeed! Thanks so much for the feedback bridgeportfox! :)
Title: A Grim Realization 30 Nov 2012 12:45 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    *sways from lack of air*

    I could just imagine Severus reaction myself. To realize that the skulls were children no bigger then Harry is frightening. Running into it like he wanted to would be pretty Gryffindorish though.

    Harry sounds as if he contracted an infection and I'm slowly about to pass out from air.

    I hope the next chapter ends this horror story.

    Author's Response: Yes, running after Harry would have been Gryffindor-ish. Yes, Harry's wound is definitely infected. The next chapter isn't going to be too crazy, luckily. It will have snippets of Evelyn and Severus running over the plan a final time, so you might get a chance to take a breath! Thanks so much for the review. It certainly made me smile!
Title: Grey 26 Nov 2012 4:51 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    *continues to hold breath and is steadly turning blue from lack of oxygen.

    I'm. Worried...like seriously so scared for Harry. So I hope the next chappie is better as I'm slowly dying over here lol.

    *come on Sev save him'*

    Author's Response: Take a breath, my friend! Yikes, you have to be  alive to read the next chapter, silly! ;) Well, the good news is that the next chapter should be up Thursday afternoon or so, and hopefully that will at least assuage some of your worries. Thanks a lot for the review!
Title: Grey 24 Nov 2012 12:30 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the mouse's journey with the button signaling device. It was a clever way to get it into the building. Fear and worry are getting to Severus and Evelyn. Waiting to be able to take action is harder than actually doing something sometimes.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked the mouse's journey! I rather enjoyed writing it. A quite agree that waiting to take action can be a lot harder ... Thanks for the review!
Title: Grey 23 Nov 2012 11:25 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, at least the mouse plan went off like clockwork,and its good that Snape and Evelyn are getting to know each other better, but its certainly not looking good for Harry or the mission at the moment. Lets hope their luck turns soon.

    Author's Response: Yes, they could use a bit more luck! Thanks for the feedback rosina! ;)
Title: Grey 23 Nov 2012 12:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear! I hope that they get there to save Harry, but don't get caught!!

    Good chapter. can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thanks Pandora! Yes, let us hope they don't get caught ... yikes!
Title: Prisoner 17 Nov 2012 1:33 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    It made me fearful for Harry....that's all I can really say honestly.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Prisoner 17 Nov 2012 2:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear. I'm very worried for Harry.
    I really hope that Snape and Evelyn can save Harry before it's too late.

    Great chapter. Can't wait for the next.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it Pandora!

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