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I liked the way Evelyn got the device to Severus. Using the Hogwarts house elves to transfer it was ingenious. Nice chapter. Author's Response: I am glad you thought the idea of the house elves as a method of transfering the box was clever. I thought that an explanation of how it all played out could bring the story to life just a little more. I am glad you like the idea of Evelyn coming back with them. You are right, it could make an interesting follow up story. But hey, she's got to make up her mind first! Thanks a lot for the review bridgeportfox!
Author's Response: Yes, let us hope Harry is quick! Thanks for the review rosina!
Another excellent update! I wonder what McTavish did to the last kid? Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad you liked it. As for what McTavish did to the last kid ... I am taking that secret to the grave ... Mwa ha ha
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, where is the fun in that anyway? And yes, things are on the verge of getting interesting! Thanks for dropping a line! Reviews are always appreciated.
Author's Response: Yeah, exciting for us and scary for Harry pretty much sums it up! Thanks so much for the feedback!
Good chapter Whitetail. Will there be more Harry/Snape interaction in this story? I am looking forward to that. I think that Harry's opinion of Snape has gone up. Author's Response: Hey Pandora! Yes, there will be more Harry/Snape interaction in the future chapters. This arrangement is not permanant, and I have found ways for Snape and Harry to communicate while in this situation. A quick break like this allows me the freedom to put other things in place in preperation for how I am planning to end the story down the road. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Haha, quite literal indeed. And yes, a break from such hard work will be good! Thanks for dropping a line!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback rosina! Yes, Severus does seem almost happy, doesn't he? I'm looking forward to Harry's story too!
I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next for Harry, Severus and Evelyn. Well done! Author's Response: Hey Rhyselle! Thanks for dropping a line! I am glad you are liking this one even more than the first. I hope it continues to live up to your expectations.
Author's Response: You have it right that Snape's not going to like digging much, that's for sure. And yes, very dangerous for Harry, but as Harry thought in the chapter, what choice do they have? All of them know how important it is that this potion is destroyed, and it's either risk dying there, or risk the potion getting out and Harry and Snape not existing because it altered their magical lineage. Anyway, thanks so much for sharing your thoughts rosina! |
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