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Title: A Transmission 12 Oct 2012 6:24 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the idea of Evelyn coming back with Harry and Severus. Her adapting to their time period at Hogwarts and the reactions of the staff and students would make a good follow-up story.
    I liked the way Evelyn got the device to Severus. Using the Hogwarts house elves to transfer it was ingenious. Nice chapter.

    Author's Response: I am glad you thought the idea of the house elves as a method of transfering the box was clever. I thought that an explanation of how it all played out could bring the story to life just a little more. I am glad you like the idea of Evelyn coming back with them. You are right, it could make an interesting follow up story. But hey, she's got to make up her mind first! Thanks a lot for the review bridgeportfox!
Title: The Mole 12 Oct 2012 1:25 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Harry's proving the Sorting Hat put him in the right house, but lets hope he can stay clear of McTavish long enough to get the required information back to Severus. Quickly.

    Author's Response: Yes, let us hope Harry is quick! Thanks for the review rosina!
Title: The Mole 06 Oct 2012 3:27 am
Reviewer: MiuBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    Run, Harry, run! Don't stay there!

    Another excellent update! I wonder what McTavish did to the last kid?

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad you liked it. As for what McTavish did to the last kid ... I am taking that secret to the grave ... Mwa ha ha
Title: The Mole 05 Oct 2012 12:27 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    well, things are about to get interesting aren't they. McTavish sounds like bad news. Hope Harry keeps his wits about him and doesn't get into too much trouble...then gain, where's the fun in that :P

    Author's Response: Haha, yeah, where is the fun in that anyway? And yes, things are on the verge of getting interesting! Thanks for dropping a line! Reviews are always appreciated.
Title: The Mole 05 Oct 2012 3:10 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think that Harry has much choice about staying. They have to have information about the Society and, unfortunately for Harry, he is the only one who can get it. At least his master is on Harry's side and not in cahoots with McTavish. It sounds like his time in the Society will be frightening for him but exciting for us.

    Author's Response: Yeah, exciting for us and scary for Harry pretty much sums it up! Thanks so much for the feedback!
Title: The Mole 04 Oct 2012 12:38 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, now I'm REALLY worried for Harry. That McTavish is a nasty piece of work.

    Good chapter Whitetail. Will there be more Harry/Snape interaction in this story? I am looking forward to that. I think that Harry's opinion of Snape has gone up.

    Author's Response: Hey Pandora!  Yes, there will be more Harry/Snape interaction in the future chapters. This arrangement is not permanant, and I have found ways for Snape and Harry to communicate while in this situation. A quick break like this allows me the freedom to put other things in place in preperation for how I am planning to end the story down the road. Thanks for the review!
Title: Gloom and Earth 29 Sep 2012 4:37 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    And so Severus and Evelyn get down and dirty - literally. At least they will have a break soon since Severus will have to make some new chairs and take them to the market to sell.

    Author's Response: Haha, quite literal indeed. And yes, a break from such hard work will be good! Thanks for dropping a line!
Title: Gloom and Earth 28 Sep 2012 11:27 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus and Evelyn do make an excellent team - he almost seems happy! - and it's good that the tunnel is progressing well. Now I'm keen to hear Harry's story.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback rosina! Yes, Severus does seem almost happy, doesn't he? I'm looking forward to Harry's story too!
Title: A Letter of Request 24 Sep 2012 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I really liked 1612, but this is even better! :-D

    I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next for Harry, Severus and Evelyn.

    Well done!

    Author's Response: Hey Rhyselle! Thanks for dropping a line! I am glad you are liking this one even more than the first. I hope it continues to live up to your expectations.
Title: A Letter of Request 23 Sep 2012 10:12 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you're sharing your very detailed idea of the Society building with us, but it's looking increasingly dangerous for Harry. He's pretty well on his own, even if Snape really does seem to care what happens to him. I bet Snape's not going to enjoy all that digging either.

    Author's Response: You have it right that Snape's not going to like digging much, that's for sure. And yes, very dangerous for Harry, but as Harry thought in the chapter, what choice do they have? All of them know how important it is that this potion is destroyed, and it's either risk dying there, or risk the potion getting out and Harry and Snape not existing because it altered their magical lineage. Anyway, thanks so much for sharing your thoughts rosina!

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