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Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 02 Apr 2024 7:22 pm
Reviewer: knightofthieves (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so good!! Snapes growth, and the way you write the characters, and plot is just so compelling all the layers. I can't wait for the next part!
Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 30 Jul 2023 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed) [Report This]
    Is this any way to finish a fic? Hurry up with the sequel, will you? I just discovered this yesterday, and I must say the story is intriguing and I hope you won't make us wait too long.

    I love your Sirius, it's so refreshing to see him cast firmly in Harry's corner.
    Tobias - you have an alcoholic's priorities spot on, Harry really has the worst luck, doesn't he? I hope the man isn't so brain-damaged yet that he can't change his path.
    Snape - I don't wonder that Harry can't trust the change in treatment, it's so stark, and I suspect that Severus' fear and relief at finding Harry safe will explode rather violently, having adverse effect on the progress they've made.
    Theo and the muggle teenagers - I loved the interactions and building friendships.
    Malfoy - you have me intrigued.
    Eileen and the dept. of mysteries - after this ending I feel like I have an incessant itch I won't be able to scratch for a while.
    Tommy is Theo's father, I suppose?

    Can't wait for more [if it wasn't clear]
Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague 19 Jun 2023 11:27 am
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much! This is a fantastic story! It has all the right ingredients for this type of fiction but you also bring in new and exciting ideas. I like Severus as Harry’s brother and his initial reluctance to do anything and his growing feeling of responsibility. The pace of your story is really just exactly right. I also love how you included Theo and showed that a friendship between Gryffindors and Slytherins is possible.
    I have read this story like two or three times already but for the last chapters I’ll reread it!
Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 17 Jun 2023 8:26 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for a wonderful first part of your story! I’m looking forward to learning more about the papers Eileen left and hope that Harry will share them with Severus. I also look forward to seeing more trust develop between the two brothers. Thanks again for your wonderful story!
Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 17 Jun 2023 8:11 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great cliffhanger chapter ending! I can’t believe there’s only one more chapter left to your story.
Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 17 Jun 2023 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent chapter and a tantalising ending.
    You ask about what I would like to see in the next chapter? I would like to see Harry and Severus fight together to reveal what Eileen found out and to stop Voldemort from taking over Slytherin House. Perhaps if Draco and teddy could join them it would be an added bonus.
    Thank you again for a wonderful story
Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 16 Jun 2023 12:07 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg…
Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 14 Jun 2023 6:30 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating! I've been following this story for a while now and am enjoying it!

    But, ahhhhhhhh!

    Okay, WHY did Draco's mom leave him when Diagon Alley was being attacked?

    And does Severus not know whether or not Harry is alive?? He's just going to find out when he arrives at Hogwarts???

    And are they really starting school as normal after the tragic attack at Diagon Alley???? Did all the school kids survive????? Did they get all their supplies before everything was destroyed?????? What about those who lost loved ones in the attack??????

    And what the heck about Harry and Snape's mom being murdered and the abuses in the Department of Mysteries???????

    REALLY needing part 2! Looking forward to it. :)
Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 13 Jun 2023 10:50 am
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh woww the plot is getting thick! I wonder what Harry will do with the information
Title: Chapter 22: The Attack 13 Jun 2023 10:50 am
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh woww the plot is getting thick! I wonder what Harry will do with the information

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