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Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 19 Apr 2023 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. A wonderful chapter but I’m a bit confused, did the bowling take place? A brilliant cliffie to finish, can’t wait for the next chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review.

    And Answering the question, no, the bowling didn't take place. Severus planned to take the boys, but he was summoned by Voldemort, and Harry didn't know anything about it, and Tobias told him to go to Diagon Alley to do the school shopping. 

Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 19 Apr 2023 6:39 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, come ON!!! A cliff hanger???????? Lol

    THANK YOU for the new chapter! I've been eagerly awaiting an update. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you <3
Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 18 Apr 2023 1:09 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you <3
Title: Chapter 21: Diagon Alley 17 Apr 2023 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! What a cliffhanger! Fantastic chapter. You're good at dialogue and moving the pace. Good descriptions too.

    I like that Draco is in character, spoiled and envious. Looking to start a fight because he needs attention.

    I like that Harry has a "mystery" to solve. He is far too curious for his own good. But it keeps it feeling like a Harry Potter book since they had mysteries in each one.

    Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review <3
Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague 08 Mar 2023 10:24 am
Reviewer: sashaCollins (Signed) [Report This]
    I already lost hope for further chapters on this story, but I’m so happy you continue writing.
    I’m so excited to know whats inside Eileens mysterious box.
    And maybe I’m sick, but I’m looking forward to a last ‘showdown’ between Harry and Tobias before he leaves for Hogwarts. I also hope that Harry and Nott stay friends during the school year.
    I’m getting strange vibes from this Rikki guy, although I think thats intended. I anxiously await the time when Severus finds out about the situation.

    Long story short… I’m hooked, so pretty please continue. Feels like a cliff hanger right now
Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague 25 Aug 2022 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    love it!!!
Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague 13 Aug 2022 4:19 pm
Reviewer: Iris (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story! Do you know when you are going to finish it?
Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague 03 Jul 2022 1:45 pm
Reviewer: Vivid Murk (Signed) [Report This]
    congrats on the update! excited to see what comes next. as for hogwarts, I'd love to see more harry and theo...perhaps getting into mischief!
Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague 02 Jul 2022 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I loved the description that Severus gave for the magical laws.
Title: Chapter 20: Kiddnappings' plague 01 Jul 2022 1:11 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the great chapter. It felt full in a good way. The spell Severus used was creative and a nice way to help as much as he could in the moment. I’m happy to hear that you have a sequel planned! I’d love to see how Theodore navigates having a Muggle girlfriend, if they end up staying together. And I’m hoping that Harry learns to rely more on Severus.

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