Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1: Surprise 05 Jun 2021 10:23 am
Reviewer: VerityGrahams (Signed) [Report This]
    This was certainly a turn in a different direction than I was expecting! I am new to reading Severus Snape as Harry's brother, and I can't wait to find out the reasons for the subterfuge and how it impacts the war and life with Severus.

    You focus on the emotions, which makes me feel for everything Harry is going through.
Title: Chapter 12: Vernon 04 Jun 2021 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done. I don’t believe that Harry would just forgive and forget all the past problems they have. I think Harry is behaving like a teenager and himself. Thank you for updating.
Title: Chapter 12: Vernon 01 Jun 2021 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great!
Title: Chapter 12: Vernon 01 Jun 2021 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great!
Title: Prologue: Morning at the Dursley's 24 May 2021 6:35 pm
Reviewer: VerityGrahams (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for sharing the link with me. I enjoyed this opening chapter because it's so different than the usual opening. We are given a completely different POV, Petunia's, and it almost makes her seem even colder. She doesn't shy from her feelings and they are justified in her own mind, which highlights why she's such a bad person.

    I think that you could use some help with how the odd thing is worded, for example: "'Of course, the whole day would be spoiled by the very thought about her!'" - grammatically speaking, it should be "the thought *of* her" not *about*.

    Overall, the first chapter managed to be new and fresh, while reminding us of the start of most HP books, it was short - which is good because it didn't have a lot of plot - and the end left us reeling because the birth certificate promises a treat to come.

    Thank you for sharing

    Vee

    Author's Response: Thank you Vee for the review :D
Title: Chapter 11: Petunia 23 May 2021 12:35 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the nice chapter. I’m looking forward (albeit a bit nervously) to Snape’s lecture.

    Author's Response: Thank you wor review :) I'm glad you like it:D
Title: Chapter 11: Petunia 22 May 2021 4:34 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter, Severus is actually being quite restrained for him but I’m sure Harry is right and he will be getting a telling off. I’m worried about what will happen when Tobias sees the mirror.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review :)
Title: Chapter 11: Petunia 19 May 2021 4:43 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooooo!

    Author's Response: LOL XD :D
Title: Chapter 10: Theodore 10 May 2021 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a cliff hanger! Severus will not be impressed!
    Thank you a good chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review :D
Title: Chapter 10: Theodore 06 May 2021 11:34 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! I hope Severus doesn’t blame Harry for Nott’s drunken state (and really hope Tobias doesn’t find out about the party or tattoo). It was fun seeing Harry and Nott acting like typical teenagers.

    Author's Response: Thank you for review :D<3

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