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Title: Chapter 5 30 Oct 2012 10:29 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this I feel bad for sev harry and draco but at least they now have eachother More please when you can. thank you.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 5 30 Oct 2012 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter although Harry does seem to be. Recovering rather quickly! Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Oh, he hasn't even begun recovering yet, this is still Self Preservation Mode with a little bit of hope thrown in. He's not going to let himself breakdown just yet.
Title: Chapter 5 27 Oct 2012 7:51 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    What a cool plan of theirs quarters. Maybe you could add a door from the lab to the bathroom - for cases of brewing accident :) Because if Snape ever lets Harry brew, there will be some explosion or two ;)
    Nice story. I wonder what happens next

    Author's Response: Oooh, interesting idea. I might work that into the story though, him adding a door now that the boys are living with him "just in case". Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 5 26 Oct 2012 5:46 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story so fa! Please update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will!
Title: Chapter 4 24 Oct 2012 12:19 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a great story sensitively handled

    Author's Response: You are very welcome, thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 23 Oct 2012 2:30 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    That's a lot to have thrown at you, but in reality in a lot of cases, there is a ton more that is told to the children and they are so overwhelmed.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I know that abused children can sometimes have a lot to deal with. Two of my sister's best friends (twins) were actually repeatedly raped at twelve by a family member and it's insane everything else that those poor girls have had to go through.
Title: Chapter 4 21 Oct 2012 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll have the new chapter up soon!
Title: Chapter 4 18 Oct 2012 11:16 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that the scene has been set up nicely it should be interesting to see how the 3 get on together.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's definitely going to be fun!
Title: Prologue and Chapter 1 18 Oct 2012 10:09 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice start. I like that Snape was unaware; it probably means he's not going to be too perfect in your story.

    Author's Response: He's definitely not perfect, but he does care about both boys.
Title: Chapter 4 18 Oct 2012 12:28 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Will Draco turn jealous?
    Bad, bad Dumble!
    I like your story and I am looking for bright future for the two boys :)

    Author's Response: If so, it won't be for long. I think actually seeing Harry so injured was a real shock for him and it will keep him from getting too jealous. This isn't an evil Dumbledore ... just a really annoying and manipulative Dumbledore. But he's kind of now realizing that he really messed up.

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