Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 9 08 Aug 2022 12:22 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s excellent that Snape is teaching Harry how to apparate. I love how Harry is trying to ease Snape into Harry’s hoped for role as father and son, as if Snape can’t see that coming from a mile away.
Title: Chapter 8 07 Aug 2022 11:59 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing, action-packed chapter. I love how you highlighted all the strangeness around Sirius’s behavior leading up to the confrontation, his offer, and even attire. And I love the watcher in the shadows.
Title: Chapter 7 07 Aug 2022 12:35 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It makes perfect sense that Harry would want to scrutinize the Marauders Map with care upon learning that it belonged to his father— and that in doing so would make certain discoveries. I loved the chapter end!
Title: Chapter 6 07 Aug 2022 1:40 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel heartened and relieved that Harry has won back Snape’s trust. Terrific chapter, as always.
Title: Chapter 5 07 Aug 2022 12:37 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The great circles are a fascinating concept to include in this story. I’m really looking forward to seeing how they are used. I love how you’ve given Harry the mental capacity to put some puzzle pieces together and draw the right conclusions from them on his own.
Title: Chapter 4 06 Aug 2022 1:01 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that you’ve created such a familiarity with Snape’s home in Lower Tarrow that I felt a sense of loss along with Harry when his trunk was packed and his transfigured bed disappeared. Thanks for another wonderful chapter full of wit and rich detail.
Title: Chapter 3 06 Aug 2022 12:30 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    You’ve written Snape brilliantly. His comments are hilarious.
Title: Chapter 2 05 Aug 2022 7:42 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the Nintendo and the lessons.
Title: Chapter 1 05 Aug 2022 1:19 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m back for a re-read, and am really enjoying it. I appreciate all the details, like Harry seeing Marge floating off in the distance, Snape’s cold, and Harry’s experience of coffee. They add a delicious richness to the characters and setting.
Title: Chapter 17 22 May 2022 8:36 am
Reviewer: MxSimsalot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I really enjoyed it

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