Nice job with Snape's reaction to Harry's memory. I always enjoy reading your stories! Will Harry be sneaking out in this story and risk Snape's wrath? Great writing...looking forward to more!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 18 Nov 2012 11:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent mix of cannon and your world thank you
I love the twist that you're putting on this story! Great job!
So Snape taught Harry to do a Patronus instead of Lupin.
Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve! :)
Love the chapter. I bet the next one is going to be interesting...
| Title: Chapter 3
| 14 Nov 2012 10:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story they are both so natural but in character, thank you so much
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Nov 2012 7:07 am
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| Reviewer: Kat (Anonymous)
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This is really good. My favorite part by far was when you mentioned Harry being able to see the inflated Aunt Marge from so far off. Of course I found the image amusing, but when Snape thought Harry had blown up Petunia, I could NOT stop laughing!
I don't like to shop and thought Harry came up with a good suggestion. Really good job on the two personalities trying to mesh together. Uncle Sebastian.
Haha this just gets better and better! Snape's already acting like a father… sort of. :D Please update again soon, I can't wait to read more!
Great chapter! This is turning out to be a very interesting summer for both Harry and Sev. I'm glad that Sev is becoming closer to Harry, though the process is slow, which makes it even more realistic!
I truly enjoyed reading this! I like the interactions between Snape and Harry- it seems to be rather comical. I do hope though that their relationship will grow closer.
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