| Title: Chapter 16
| 18 Feb 2013 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a fantastic chapter loved the scene with Fudge
Bravo!
I have thoroughly enjoyed this tale from its inception to this rather satisfying conclusion. You've done an exceptional job in crafting this story - I loved it. Well done. A definite favorite.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 15 Feb 2013 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Kiromenanz (Anonymous)
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Love it xD I actually should be working for some stuff for school, but I just can't stop reading this.
One question though: Could it be that you watched "Blink"? Just a thought, after the angels that might be moving, creepy statues and all that jazz (It took me some time to recover from that particular episode. It's not very beneficial to be afraid of statues when you're having art lessons twice a week)
That aside, I love how you describe the relationship between those two and how you work those transitions into the chapters without making them awkward (for example when Harry started calling Snape Dad).
And you did really well on making Snape human. I always think it's quite difficult, because he seems like some inhuman meanie who never sleeps, never smiles and stuff like that.
I guess I'm not going to sleep tonight before finishing your whole story... (btw another thing I love are the long chapters ^___^)
Author's Response: Oh yes, I'm definitely a Whovian. ;) weeping angels are CREEPY, so naturally, the Dark Lord has them. Thanks for the great compliments!
I so enjoy reading your stories. Thank you for writing. Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination.
| Title: Chapter 17
| 14 Feb 2013 4:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous)
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Great ending. Loved your characterizations! You do such a good Job of making Snape caring and yet keeping him snarky. Thank you!
Aww I can't believe that it's over! This has been one of my favorite stories. :) Any chance of a sequel? Or are you planning on writing anymore Harry/Severus father stories? Either way, this has truly been a wonderful story!
Aw, its over? I don't suppose there will be a sequel?
Regardless, this was a great fic and I really enjoyed it :). I liked all the twists you made and I don't think things could have ended any better!
Wicked! I love your stories and sad to see another end. Any chance for another guardian/father one or brother one with Toby and Eileen?
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