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Reviews For Harry My Brother
Title: Chapter 2 02 Jan 2013 1:06 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really wasn't expecting that reaction or the adoption. I hope who ever his brother is will give him a chance and Snape too.

    Author's Response: Severus realized the year before that He could not blame the son for the actions of the parent plus he does not want to scare Harry by ragging about his mother so he is keeping his anger on the inside. Harry's brother will come into the story in a couple of chapters time with a surprisingly understanding nature.
Title: Chapter 1 01 Jan 2013 5:11 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    (bows down at your feet) Tell me why is there only one chapter so far. I like this Petunia in a way and I hate Lily in away too but I can kinda understand about give the child up for adoption at 16 but not even telling Severus. Of course he couldn't raise him himself but he might have been able to convince Lily to keep the boy even if she didn't love him anymore. But then James probably wouldn't want to raise Severus's son and then there would have been no Harry and that is just confusing so I am going to stop typing and wait for you next chapter with anticipation.

    Author's Response: I have only one chapter up because I had not planned on writing this but when I saw the Unknown Brother challenge I was bitten by the bug and just had to write this, I will be posting the second chapter very soon. I wanted Lily to come across as selfish because it works so well for the story line I am using, So I am glad that it came across. Thank you for the Review.
Title: Chapter 1 01 Jan 2013 2:09 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting beginning. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the next chapter will be out soon.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting start to this - which cross over world will this be with? Most curious...

    Looking forward to see where you go from here.

    Hugs and Love and Happy New Year!
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I think i mention the Cross-over in the authors not in the first chapter however I may not have, so I will give you a hint, It was a major British Blockbuster from the latter part of this year. The characters from it should come into the story in about three chapters time so worry not you will soon find out. Happy new Year to you too.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Harry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please please please write more chapters! I can't wait to see how Snape reacts!

    Author's Response: I will be posting more soon and Snape's reaction along with a deeper look into fourth year will happen in the next couple of chapters.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 7:27 pm
Reviewer: tatis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    omg!!
    fantatic!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review I am glad that you are enjoying the story.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 6:18 am
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Awsome beginning - not sure I've read anything quite like this, please continue.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the Review. It is nice to know that I am doing something different because that is what I was going for, I will be updating next week.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 6:09 am
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this so far. Can't wait to see what you cross it with.

    Author's Response: Thank you for Review. I think I say what the Crossover will be in the first chapter but if not then I shall leave it as a surprise because it will come in three or four chapters time.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 2:39 am
Reviewer: LadyNiteRaven (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really great start .. more please..SOON!

    :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review hopefully I will have the chance to update later next week.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Dec 2012 12:59 am
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice, I'm waitting for more :)

    Author's Response: Thanks I will hopefully have the next chapter up at the end of next week.

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