I can’t wait to return to Bell Point. It’s been too long…
This was a lovely chapter. I’m enjoying the pace of your story.
I'm loving this story so far! Your writing style is to be emulated.
Author's Response: Why thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it!
| Title: Deep Magic
| 22 Jan 2013 8:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved this chapter, it was quieter and set up so much for the future. I loved the scene of Harry sleeping in Hagrids' lap! I would love a picture of that if any clever people could do it. thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Heck, I'd love a picture of that too. I would draw one, but I am absolutely frightful at drawing people! Cheers!
I didn't find the chapter too mundane. I enjoyed comparing how similar both Harry and Snape's situations are. Yet the solution for them is opposite. Snape needs to control his anger and frustration while Harry has to vent his emotions. It will be interesting to see how they cope together.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the comparison between Harry and Snape. I have tried to give them common ground throughout the course of the story, as well as highlight their differences. Thanks so much for the review and insight, bridgeportfox!
Nice interlude for Harry with Hagrid. I like how his four year old self takes over from the older version when he gets annoyed. Wonder which will prevail when he and Snape meet up.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes indeed, how will Harry act when he and Snape are together?
I love this story so much! I can't wait to see what happens to poor Harry and Severus when they are are stuck together! Thank you!
Author's Response: And thank you for reviewing! I am very happy that you are enjoying this story. A writer loves nothing more than to know that their work has been read and thought over. Cheers!
I don't generally *like* de-aging fics, but the ideas behind this one are extremely interesting and plausible within the magical world. I'm going to just add you to my favorite authors and be done with it so I never miss updates. ;-)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks cckeimig for adding me to your favourite authors! It is a handy way not to miss a new post, huh? I am glad that you think the explanation is plausible. I am a bit of a stickler for things having to be logical, so I try my best to make them that way. I think that's why I love HP so much. J.K. seems to have written it so that there is a kind of inherent logic built into the magical world. It really brings it to life. Anyway, thanks for the review, as always!
Wow. I really love how you are building this story up. I hope you add to it soon! I found myself loving the moments of Harry being held and loved by Hagrid! I cannot wait for the next chapters! Bravo!
Author's Response: The build up was a bit of a trick for this one in places, so I am glad you are liking it. Oh yes, and Harry and Hagrid! I liked writing that part. Thanks for the review LucCa. ;)
Ahh I'm loving this story idea, can't wait to see where you go with this and for you to get further into the story where Harry and Snape have to spend so much time together! So good :D
Author's Response: I am very pleased you are liking it. Yes indeed, there will be plenty of Harry and Snape interaction to come, but it takes a little while to set it all up. Believe me, I'm excited to post some scenes with them together too! Thanks for the feedback! :)
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