Yes, it’s good to see Snape putting the pieces together.
I love that Snape is sensing that there’s more to Harry’s past, and that he’s actually taking action. It feels like a burden lifting, even as Harry himself remains unaware of it all. Thanks for another brilliant chapter.
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| 09 Apr 2013 3:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
Author's Response: Glad you liked if Fmh!
Nice chapter! It's great that Harry's past is coming out, and I loved the way you revealed some of Snape's feelings regarding Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Ivycloak! Iit is great to hear you are happy with how I showed Severus' feelings.
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| 31 Mar 2013 3:01 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I'm loving this story! I avoided it of a long time because the blurb didnt interest me, but I was bored and remembered I'd enjoyed your other stories so I thought I'd give it a try. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Well, I am tickled pink you had faith enough to try this story despite not being interested at first! Thank you so much for the review, and I hope this story continues to live up to your expectations. ;)
I don't know how you manage it, but each chapter seems better than the last. I loved Harry's internal discussion as to who to go to for help; he and Snape are really good together now - especially now Snape is picking up on all the little snippets of information Harry is unintentionally letting slip.
Author's Response: Thanks so much rosina! I am relieved that you liked Harry's internal battle. I had a fair bit of difficulty with that part, so it is nice to know it was appreciated.
| Title: The Letter
| 30 Mar 2013 10:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous)
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So close to a cupboard being revealed! Love the Snape & Harry bonding.
Author's Response: Yes, Harry only just avoided that slip-up! Great to hear you are liking the bonding! Thank you for reviewing. ;)
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| 30 Mar 2013 5:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Silver_Snake (Anonymous)
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AH! Brilliant chapter as always, I love how you've weaved in Hermonie in the story and your Snape and Harry exchanges are progressing nicely :) I also loved how you had Snape deal with Harry's bed-wetting and the growing realisation of Harry's that Snape is taking on a different light in his eyes. I adored the colouring in scene in chapter 10, I even drew a fan art of it so maybe I'll link it to you sometime ;3 Snapes talk with Hermonie was also good, I felt it was realistic and had some nice threading in of how he felt as a teen.
So sorry all of this is so late but I've been bogged down and Easter finally gave me a opportunity to read my favourite story! Hope you're having a wonderful holiday :)
Author's Response: Wow, you drew some fan art of the colouring scene? I would absolutely love to see it Silver_Snake! I am very glad you are enjoying the growing relationship between Harry and Severus. It is great to hear you also liked the conversation Hermione had with Snape as well. I had to work that part over numerous times. I also do not mind t hte feedback being late in the least! It is quite exciting to get a comment on a previous chapter because it is such a nice surprise! Thank you for the review and well wishes!
I think Harry would be more comfortable talking to Snape about the be wetting issue than to Hermione. It would be difficult for a little boy, especially a former teenager, to talk to a girl about something so personal. He and Severus both know of each others weaknesses so it would probably be easier.
Author's Response: Yes, I quite agree. Thanks for reviewing!
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| 30 Mar 2013 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous)
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AWWWWWWWWWWWW, so cute! I love these chapter, i love how snape is snipping at the truth little by little. So cute! And to see harry trust severus! Heart warming.
Author's Response: Thanks Pika!
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