Omg! It is so cute. Just the three of them chilling in the living room, like a real family. Snape was really good with Hermione. I hope that he becomes both of their guardians or adopts them or something. They both could use someone stable and reliable.
Can't wait for more! Great chapter as usual.
Author's Response: They would make a sweet family, wouldn't they? Glad you thought it was good! Thanks for the feedback. ;)
| Title: Facing Fears
| 05 Apr 2013 3:39 am
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| Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous)
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Cute but needed more harry and severus. I liked thinking of severus petting harry. What was up with the marble, how abused was harry really, Why does no other adults think to check up besides molly, like the rest of anyone from the order. Like is molly the only one that cares? And why hasn't Remus bothered visting harry? Well even with these questions i thought these was another good chapter even if it was heavly Hermoine base.
Author's Response: I figured a few people wouldn't really care for the Hermione scene, but I have to keep her involved in the plot, and there are a few things later on that couldn't happen without her. That, and I like writing her. There is more Harry and Severus coming up though, so don't fret. Hmm, as for your plethora of questions ;) ... The marble reminded Harry of the prophecy, which was round, shiny, and a kind of blue-green, just like the marble. So it brought him back to what happened at the Ministry, which was why he reacted so badly. The others from the Order don't visit because Harry's situation has been kept hushed as Dumbledore fears Voldemort finding out; as you may recall, it was mentioned that Harry couldn't tell Hermione through the mail what he had been deaged, which was a hint as to what kind of security measures Dumbledore is taking. And throughout Half-Blood Prince Lupin was supposed to be working undercover with werewolves, so I don't have him show up because I assume that his missions began shortly after Department of Mysteries. Hope that clears it up. Thanks for reviewing.
:) one child down one to go and 1/2 and adult
Author's Response: Sure thing! Thanks for your review!
I enjoyed the scene with Harry spinning around in circles. I remember doing it myself many years ago. The scene with Severus and Hermione was wonderful. It's nice that he doesn't have to keep up his nasty Death Eater facade and can afford to be comforting to Hermione. And I think they both were surprised when he was unable to do the spell to get rid of the boggart.
Author's Response: Ah yes, I too recall spinning in circles. It is a wonder I never needed stitches. I am glad you enjoyed the scene between Harry and Severus, and liked that Severus could comfort Hermione. Thanks for the review!
Another great chapter, i particularly liked the conversation between sev and hermione. The boggart scene was done very well.
Author's Response: I am very glad you liked the boggart scene. It was a nice departure from the usual, or at least for me! Thanks for reviewing!
Love it looking forward to more
Author's Response: Great to hear! Thanks for reviewing!
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