The quintessential game of catch—too delightful for words.
I loved the catch scene. It was poignant and so well done. Snape’s introspection was beautifully insightful.
Title: Scrapes and Cuts
| 18 Apr 2013 12:03 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good luck with the finals! Thank you for. Sweet chapter with a lot of fluff!
Author's Response: Thanks for the well wishes, Fmh! I am very glad you enjoyed the fluff!
Very comfy chapter, everyone is getting better. Or is it the silence before a storm? ;)
Author's Response: Hmm ... silence before the storm? Maybe. Maybe not. ;) Thank you for the review!
I LOVED the interaction in this, and how Snape is determined to get answers about Harry. I still want to see the moment when Hermione really realizes just how changed both Snape and Harry are.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Ivycloak! I am glad you enjoyed it so much!
Maybe in the future they'll upgrade to throwing an American football. That thing takes skill to throw right.
So will Albus heed Sev's demands?
Author's Response: I don't know about a football though - Haha, I can't even throw one that well and both my arms work just fine! It would be a good step up though, for sure! Hmm ... I suppose only time will tell if Dumbledore is going to reply, huh? Thanks for the review!
I really liked this chapter - the scene with Snape and Harry playing catch was very sweet and a joy to read. I also liked how Harry asked for Snape when he got hurt on the swing. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
(Good luck on your finals)
Author's Response: Great to hear your thoughts darkorangecat! Thanks for the luck! ;)
My finals start next week to so I'm going to be understanding if there is a wait! But I can't wait to see what happens next. I will say I did love the catch scene and Snape's demand.
Author's Response: I'm pretty confident I should have it up on time, but it is comforting to know someone understands if I get too busy! I am glad you liked the catch scene. Thanks for reviewing, and good luck on your finals!
Aww poor Harry but there were a lot of careing and sweet moments in the chapter. Now if only Dumbles will come and answer Severus call. But, we all know that Dumbles knows about Harrys home life and incurages it so he can b the hero in the end and Harry will be dead. Severus is going to be mad when and if he finds out.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the sweet moments. I cannot imagine Severus being overly pleased upon finding all that out either! Thanks for reviewing!
I enjoyed the scene of them playing catch, too. Harry's quick exit and the reason for it made me laugh. It was nice that Snape realized that he has been the bad guy for so long that he has trouble thinking of himself as good. Since his spying days are over, maybe this was a good way for him to ease back into being the good guy.
Author's Response: It is nice to hear you enjoyed Severus' thoughs on being a bad guy. I have always thought that it would be difficult for him to adjust to normal life, and not having to act so evil all the time. Great to hear you got a chuckle or two out of Harry's mad dash. Thanks for dropping a line. ;)
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