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Reviews For Prisoners
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the feedback Karis! I feel honoured that you chose to rate this story so high. Hmm, it should be interesting when Severus finds out more about Harry's past, and I am looking forward to some of that myself!
Author's Response: I say ... that good of a chapter? I am tickled pink to hear that. Haha, glad you liked the game of catch. Thanks cckeimig!
The slower pace is also well chosen as none of the steps towards a closer relationship seem forced or rushed. So, thank you for your wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter. Good luck with your finals too. Author's Response: Hi Saffronfrog! It is great to hear that you are liking the way the premise of the story is helping with character development. I am also glad that you are enjoying the slower pace. Pacing has been a bit tricky with this story for me, and I've spent many a night ruminating on whether or not I should slow down or speed up! Thanks for the well wishes regarding finals, and the helpful feedback!
SO CUTE, I even loved hermoine in these chapter! I mean everything was so cute! But i want Sevvy to yell at dumbledore. I can see why harry would want severus, the man has been there for him when he needed someone. He proven that he can be trusted and that even if he is stirced that he still cares. Harry needs someone like that in his life. Severus also needs someone he can take care of and that will love him, and harry can fit that. Hermoine also helps add to this story. Good job! And shes very in character, this is what i think she'd do if this happened in the real story! Harry's so cute and i thought at first when he ran off he was scared of thunder! I love the sevvy and harry bonding too. Great chapter! Author's Response: Yay! I am pleased you liked Hermione. Yes, I agree that Severus and Harry are good for eachother. It is great to hear you think that Hermione has been in character. I don't write her all that often, so it is helpful to hear your thoughts on her. Ah yes, Harry being scared of the thunder was a very logical conclusion. Haha, funny you should mention that ... you'll see why soon! Thanks for reviewing Pika!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Kai for the kind words!Great to hear you are enjoying it. I am so glad that there is a place as great as Potions and Snitches to share storeis like this. Writing is way more fun when others read and review your work, so thanks to you as well!
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