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Title: Scrapes and Cuts 12 Apr 2013 2:08 am
Reviewer: Karis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story and get excited every time it is updated. This is the only story on P&S that I have ever given a 10. I can't wait for Severus to find out more about Harry's past.

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the feedback Karis! I feel honoured that you chose to rate this story so high. Hmm, it should be interesting when Severus finds out more about Harry's past, and I am looking forward to some of that myself!
Title: Scrapes and Cuts 12 Apr 2013 1:50 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    One of the(if not THE) best chapters so far. Loved the catch-playing and everything else! :-)

    Author's Response: I say ... that good of a chapter? I am tickled pink to hear that. Haha, glad you liked the game of catch. Thanks cckeimig!
Title: Scrapes and Cuts 12 Apr 2013 1:35 am
Reviewer: Saffronfrog (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this story - it is an unusual idea and works really well as a device to break down the usual constraints on the characters while still maintaining their personalities.

    The slower pace is also well chosen as none of the steps towards a closer relationship seem forced or rushed.

    So, thank you for your wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter. Good luck with your finals too.

    Author's Response: Hi Saffronfrog! It is great to hear that you are liking the way the premise of the story is helping with character development. I am also glad that you are enjoying the slower pace. Pacing has been a bit tricky with this story for me, and I've spent many a night ruminating on whether or not I should slow down or speed up! Thanks for the well wishes regarding finals, and the helpful feedback!
Title: Scrapes and Cuts 12 Apr 2013 1:14 am
Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww,
    SO CUTE, I even loved hermoine in these chapter! I mean everything was so cute! But i want Sevvy to yell at dumbledore. I can see why harry would want severus, the man has been there for him when he needed someone. He proven that he can be trusted and that even if he is stirced that he still cares. Harry needs someone like that in his life. Severus also needs someone he can take care of and that will love him, and harry can fit that. Hermoine also helps add to this story. Good job! And shes very in character, this is what i think she'd do if this happened in the real story! Harry's so cute and i thought at first when he ran off he was scared of thunder! I love the sevvy and harry bonding too. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yay! I am pleased you liked Hermione. Yes, I agree that Severus and Harry are good for eachother. It is great to hear you think that Hermione has been in character. I don't write her all that often, so it is helpful to hear your thoughts on her. Ah yes, Harry being scared of the thunder was a very logical conclusion. Haha, funny you should mention that ...  you'll see why soon! Thanks for reviewing Pika!
Title: Scrapes and Cuts 12 Apr 2013 12:30 am
Reviewer: Kai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just want to say this has quickly become one of my most favourite stories. You write very well - the characters are beautifully drawn and the dialogue is also handled really well. I love the awkward interactions that are gradually helping each of them to perceive the other person. Fabulous job! Thank you for sharing your work.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much Kai for the kind words!Great to hear you are enjoying it. I am so glad that there is a place as great as Potions and Snitches to share storeis like this. Writing is way more fun when others read and review your work, so thanks to you as well!
Title: Scrapes and Cuts 11 Apr 2013 11:42 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it can't wait for more. Lovely chapter. Good luck on your finals.

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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