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Title: Thunder Overhead 19 Apr 2013 9:01 am
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked your forts ... thank you!

    Author's Response: Great to hear from you!
Title: Thunder Overhead 19 Apr 2013 5:09 am
Reviewer: Karis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwww. I love the interactions between Snape, Hermione, and Harry. Awesome chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Thunder Overhead 19 Apr 2013 2:59 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a neat chapter. A bad thunderstorm at night can be scary, especially for a child. Building a fort to keep out the bad stuff was a nice idea. I liked the way Snape managed to share some of his bad memories with the frightened Harry, too. The three of them safe inside the fort listening to stories until the storm let up was a pleasant image.

    Author's Response: It is great to hear you enjoyed the events of this chapter, between the fort and Snape sharing his memories. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: Thunder Overhead 18 Apr 2013 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Saphron (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm loving the Harry/Hermione interaction in this story. This was a very sweet chapter and my favourite chapter so far.

    Author's Response: Your favourite chapter so far? That's awesome to hear! I really liked this one myself. I am pleased you are liking the Harry and Hermione interaction.
Title: Thunder Overhead 18 Apr 2013 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter had so much tenderness in it, it made my heart melt for Harry and Snape both. Hermione fit in nicely as well, with her sisterly or motherly actions. I loved it!

    Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed Hermione as well as Snape and Harry in this chapter! Thanks for the review, Ivycloak!
Title: Thunder Overhead 18 Apr 2013 9:21 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    It was cute, this story really is adorable in its own right as who couldn't love a four year old Harry. I especially like the part where Snape is starting to really come around for both Harry and his sake. I just wish his magic wasn't gone forever...

    Author's Response: Who says his magic is gone forever, hmm? There's always hope that he'll learn to wave a wand again! I am happy to hear that you think the story is adorable, and that you're liking how Snape is changing. Thanks for the review!
Title: Thunder Overhead 18 Apr 2013 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Pika (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, so very cute. Everyone was cute, Hermoine you go! Get harry to tell the lovley manbat about what he went throught. Manbat-I mean sevvy great job being all fatherly you did a great job protecting harry from the Eeeeevvvviiiillll lightining! But you shouldnt sleep on the floor it's bad for your back love. Oh and harry dear Your so cute and i think you should follow your sevvy around lie alittle ducky more offten.
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    Hi Whitetail,
    How are you feeling, How is everything going. THis is the first time i've written a letter just to you to talk about your story but i tought i should. Your doing a great job with the story you once more kept hermione well in character, which most find hard in fanfics. Severus and harry is deloping a lovely bound, but i can't tell if it's becoming more of a friends thing or if it's becoming a parent thing; We'll see in the future. I enjoy that instead of fearing the thunder becauses it's loud and could remind harry of his uncle, you have him fear the ightening because of the death of his mummy. Overall your doing a great job so keep it up.
    Love,
    Pika

    Author's Response: I'm doing quite well, Pika! Thanks for asking! Little tired from finals, but good. I am glad you think Hermione's in character, and that you are enjoyed Harry's reason for not liking lightning. Snicker ... manbat. Busted a gut over that ... Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Thunder Overhead 18 Apr 2013 4:15 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    really great chapter, i particularly liked how snape and harry worked together to build the fort and how snape answered harry's question when he could have refused. Can't wait for the next update :)

    Author's Response: Hey, great to hear you thought the fort-building was good. I had fun with that, and Harry's question, of course! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Thunder Overhead 18 Apr 2013 3:34 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    A storm, a storm! I saw in in my tea-leaves. Well, my tea-bag ;)
    Very nice chapter!

    Author's Response: Haha, you did! I was dying to tell you that you were on the right track! Glad you liked the chapter. ;)
Title: Thunder Overhead 18 Apr 2013 1:31 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more. Update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, cara-tanaka! ;)

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