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Title: The Evils of Baths 03 May 2013 10:12 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a delightful chapter. Harry was truly Harry, little Harry, how I wish Harry could forget what "they" did to him and grow up again....with caring and compassion. I love the mud puddles and the bath. Anyone who has ever let a kid pour in their own bubble bath can relate.

    Author's Response: I am glad you liked Harry's carefree play, and the bath and mud puddles. Hmm, yes, it would be nice if Harry could forget all of that, but alas, the past is written. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: The Evils of Baths 03 May 2013 6:09 am
Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous) [Report This]
    fantastic job describing Harry's love of puddles and mud! I could really see a tiny Harry splashing and splatting. Excellently written. (more please)

    Author's Response: It is nice to hear that you enjoyed the description of Harry's love of puddles and mud. That came pretty easily, as I too have had a longstanding love of mud puddles. Anyway, thank you for the review!
Title: The Evils of Baths 03 May 2013 5:02 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Poor Harry.

    I'm glad that Snape is getting more and more of a picture of what Harry's homelife really was like.

    I hope that he can stay with Snape and never have to go back to the Dursleys.

    Author's Response: Yes, it is good that Snape's had his eyes opened. And anywhere is definitely better than the Durselys! Thanks for the review Pandora!
Title: The Evils of Baths 03 May 2013 4:26 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww..... Sweet ending! More?

    Author's Response: Yes, there is more fluff on the horizon! Not so much next chapter, but the ones after that ... yes. Thanks for the review!
Title: The Evils of Baths 03 May 2013 2:51 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the chapter. Poor Harry - overcome by mud. His reaction made sense though I hadn't expected it. (Neither did Hermione!) He has really come to trust Severus who seems able to calm Harry and ease Hermione's hurt feelings. Our little group seems top be getting on better.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review bridgeportfox! Yes, the group does seem to have gotten better at getting along, eh?
Title: The Evils of Baths 03 May 2013 2:30 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    :) I laughed just at the title. Why is it that young kids (mostly boys) Hate baths.

    Well Harry had a reason to hate them but still.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked the title. Yes, children are funny that way. Thanks for the review!

Title: The Evils of Baths 03 May 2013 1:35 am
Reviewer: Kanzenhsohi (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it!!

    Author's Response: That's good to hear! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: The Evils of Baths 02 May 2013 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter! I'm looking forward every Thursday to read a new chapter of this story!
    I'm curious, what will happen next... Which "father-son" activity you will concoct... What about make them to make and fly a kite? I'm sure, their kite would be interesting. =D
    I'm already looking forward the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Wow, fantastic to hear that you are looking forward to the next chapters! Hmm ... well, I don't think kite flying is in my roster - although I did consider it. I like to think I came up with something better. Mwa ha ha. But that's not next chapter, but the one after. Next chapter is pretty low key on the cuteness, sadly, but it's food for the plot.  Anyway, enough hints. Thanks for the feedback Hesperis!
Title: The Evils of Baths 02 May 2013 11:03 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah bless i loved that chapter, harry and sev in the bathroom was a cute moment, wonder what smell the bubble bath was :)

    Author's Response: Cherry scented all the way! I should have thrown that in there, shouldn't I have? Great to haer your thoughts ;)
Title: The Evils of Baths 02 May 2013 10:51 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Little Harry makes me laugh every time! He just can't help but get into trouble when he's having fun. There's no going back for Severus now - being kind to both Harry and Hermione seems to have become second nature to him.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry is a little trouble maker, bless him. Then again, aren't all four year olds? Yes, Severus has reached the point of no return, hasn't he? It's taken him some time to get there. Thanks for reviewing rosina!

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