Oh my gosh, total cliffhanger! I love that Severus saw the silhouette as well.
Ah! This is one of those stories that stays with you. One that you can rely on to entertain you and make you cry even months after you've already read it , so freaking good!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Scorpia! I admit I still read it from time to time, so I am so glad you enjoy it every bit as much as I do - it was very much a labour of love and I am so glad I could share it with you. Cheers, Whitetail
| Title: Fire in the Sky
| 04 Jun 2013 9:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you despite the cliffie! Love how their relationships are developing
Author's Response: Great to hear that you are liking the relationships Fmh! Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Fire in the Sky
| 04 Jun 2013 4:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Silver_Snake (Anonymous)
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Hnnnggghhhh....*breathing heavily after cliffhanger* I was uber scared though the lightning was actually death eaters on brooms though but now you're scaring me with a old tree of doom *gets paper bag and breaths into it* Cheers for Snape creating some shield barrier or some kind of spontaneous save Harry device, basically you've made me incoherent with worry.
But regardless of my fear, I still loved this chapter as always, nice insight into Harry's head and Snape really handled the situation well :3 Also thought the device you used to get Harry out of the house (hallucination?) of Padfoot's dog form was pretty realistic considering the emotional state he's in and made my heart clench for him.
*throws hexes past you hitting the evil tree* I knew that tree was bad news ever since Harry scraped his knee from being on that swing!
Author's Response: I did mention that the tree was rotting at some point ... so yes, bad news, haha! Ah ... the device I used to get Harry outside. Hallucination, indeed? That is the question. I am especially glad you liked that. I jumped up and down with excitement when the idea came to me, so it is good to hear it was appreciated! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Awesome, heart-stopping cliffhanger that has me quite literally on the edge of my seat. Wonderful details throughout this chapter which made this chapter leap off the page; I could picture the lightning and feel the wind. I'm eager for more.
Author's Response: Great to hear that you though the chapter was so engaging, darkorangecat! I look forward to posting the next chapter as well! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Wow. That certainly was a cliffhanger! The day sounded like a depressing one to start with - a cloudy, gray day would be harder to take for Harry and Hermione, who were both feeling down anyway. I liked the way you had the storm building and then Harry running out into the middle of it followed by Severus.It will be hard to wait until next week for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Great to hear that you enjoyed the atmosphere, as well as Harry's rash decision. Thanks so much for the review!
| Title: Fire in the Sky
| 01 Jun 2013 1:21 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Ohh! Please let them be OK thank you for. Updating
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Fmh!
Yes, terrible, horrible, evil cliffhanger! One of the worst!
Well, while I may not want to wait for more (pout), from an analytical point of view my excitement means that this was very well done. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks Ivycloak for the review! I am glad that you are so excited about the story ... even though it means rather unfortunately that it will make it harder to wait for the next chapter! It'll come next week though. Nothing worse than a story being abandoned on a cliff hanger ... I shudder to think. Now *that* is evil!
| Title: Fire in the Sky
| 31 May 2013 10:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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You mean a two-day week, don't you?!? Terrible cliffhanger in a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Haha, sorry Eszther. A long, seven day week. Hopefully it won't be too painful for you ... :S Thanks for reviewing!
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