Reviews For Prisoners
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! It is wonderful to hear that you are enjoying Snape in this story, and that he doesn't feel that out of character. Great to hear you liked the Hermione thing too! Cheers!
One more thing because I'm obviously slow today. In that one part where they're talking about Hermione's patronus..Severus said: "It's the people that make a h -" I know its a word but its annoying the heck out of me that I can't think of the word so I figured I'd just ask :)
Author's Response: Home is the word! Sorry you were stuck on that! I totally get it, when the brain is just elsewhere and then it's driving you nuts what the word, or name or thing is! Maybe I'll add another letter to make it easier. I am glad you are enjoying the story, and I too am pretty sad that it's coming to a close. It's just been a good fic to write emotionally, you know? A good one to pour the soul into. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: Hey kjpotter! I am so pleased to hear you have been enjoying the story! And yes, Prisoners is coming to a close, however much I hate to say it. I wish I could let it go on forever, but alas, one must know when to bring things to a close, and I feel that this is the time. Other projects call to me as well, so I suppose it isn't as though I will have nothing to do, but I will still miss this story very much when it does end! I am very glad you enjoyed this chapter, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: Howdy bridgeportfox! Great to hear from you. I am glad you enjoyed Dumbledore. He is really hard to write sometimes because people are so picky about his character. A lot either love him or hate him, so I am glad you thought so well of my take on Dumbledore, and his talk with Severus about Hermione. I spent a long time trying to figure out how Severus would be able to see past his own fears and understand that Hermione too was longing for a different home, even one with him in it! I am particularly glad that you enjoyed the prison sequence. I thought very hard about that, and like I said, it was a late addition. I originally just had Harry waking up, but I think this offers more closure. Anyway, thank you so very much for the detailed review!
Author's Response: Oh, dear, there were a large number of silly things he did! I suppose embarrasment is inevitable! Thanks for the review and thoughts Ivycloak!! ;)
I know that this is a little premature, but I would love to see a sequel with Harry and Hermione and Sev as their guardian.
I'm sorry to see the story come to an end though, but I've enjoyed it so much. You did a really great job with digging down deep into your character's emotions.
Author's Response: Lol, I've only just kinda decided how I'm ending this story! A sequel though ... hmm. I don't think I will write one, but it could happen. I have a bad track record for saying I'm not writing a sequel, and then getting hit over the head with an idea and ending up with a huge sequel on my hands anyway. So, it is possible, but I am not entirely planning on it at the moment. It is good to hear that you are enjoying the story still, and that you have appreciated the depth that I have been attempting to create within the characters. Thanks so much for the feedback Pandora!
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