Heartbreaking memory, but the aftermath was sweet. I’m glad that Snape and little Harry’s relationship has carried over to teen Harry.
Thanks for the profoundly beautiful reminder that it’s the little things that make all the difference.
| Title: The Little Things
| 13 Apr 2021 11:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Awee I'm gonna miss toddler harry so much! But I'm so happy he retains that trust and safety he found in severus
I liked the way you ended with this chapter, with Severus's thoughts on the little things. And I wholeheartedly agree with his opinion.
Author's Response: Hey, Ivycloak! It is fantastic to hear you enjoyed hearing Severus' thoughts and opinions on the little things. Thanks for sharing yours!
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| 29 Jun 2013 12:13 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you very moving and very well handled thank you
Author's Response: Great to hear you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :)
| Title: The Little Things
| 28 Jun 2013 6:46 pm
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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This chapter was wonderful. The memory was horrible, but the ending, those "small acts of love" were such a heartwarming way to end a difficult and depressing situation.
Author's Response: I figured I needed a pretty good ending to keep this chapter from being so darned depressing, so I am glad you liked the small acts of love thing. Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
I loved this chapter. Harry's memory was so sad. It must have really hit Snape since he took care of a Harry that was close to that age. It sounds like Albus has something in mind for the Dursleys. I wonder if he will include Snape or not? I especially liked the end about small acts of love. Very true.
Author's Response: Great to hear from you, bridgeportfox! Yeah, I imagine it must have been hard for Severus. And yeah, Albus does seem a little nefarious, doesn't he? I suppose time will tell what he has planned. Great to hear you liked the ending too! Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: The Little Things
| 28 Jun 2013 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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Yay! Great update. love the stars. :) Thanks, tabbycatx
Author's Response: Thanks tabbycat! I thought the stars were fun too. ;)
lol I liked Harrys version of the song "Like a dia- day ... sparkle in the sky ..." but it was sad when he added like Mummy and Daddy.
To bad they won't let Severus kill them but I agree that he just got Harry and Harry just got him and why break that.
The last sentence is so true. The little things no matter how small will always add up to something bigger.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought that a three year old would have trouble pronouncing diamond. Glad you liked that! I wasn't sure if I'd keep the Mummy and Daddy thing though, because it sounded a little cheesy to me at times, but I decided to keep it anyway. True indeed. Thanks so much for reviewing!
That was such a good memory to choose to showcase both Harry's and the Dursleys' character.This chapter is one of my favourite of the whole story so imagine a couple of virtual stars to add to the 10 rating.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much rosina! I am so glad to hear this is one of your favourite chapters. It was a tricky one to write, so to hear that you enjoyed it so much is just great. I ruminated on which particular memory for a long time before writing. Cheers!
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