| Title: Come Home, Hermione
| 05 Jul 2013 9:12 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Whew, Severus did it - even if he is a Snape! And there's more to come? Happy days.
Author's Response: More to come indeed. Great to hear you are pleased with that! Thanks for reviewing. ;)
| Title: Come Home, Hermione
| 05 Jul 2013 1:37 pm
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| Reviewer: darkorangecat (Anonymous)
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This had me both crying and laughing. Brilliantly written. A true joy to read this chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks darkorangecat! It is just fantastic to hear that this had an emotional impact on you. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts!
excellent and touching chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, snapefan 17!
| Title: Come Home, Hermione
| 05 Jul 2013 11:06 am
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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What a wonderful chapter! I am glad that you decided Severus to come around before she actually left instead of lenghty separations and even more misunderstandings before they can be a family. I have to read Anne of Green Gables now. Thank you!
Author's Response: Hey Eszther! It is good to hear that you enjoyed the chapter, and liked the result of it! I thought it would have been rather cruel to separate them, and that once Hermione had gone, Severus might not have the courage to go after her. And yes, you should read Anne of Green Gables (it's written by L.M. Montgomery). It is a lovely book - and one of my personal favourites. Sweet, and sad at times, but wonderful.
| Title: Come Home, Hermione
| 05 Jul 2013 9:16 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Yeah, what a great way to celebrate the 4th, with Hermione staying with Harry and Severus. And I agree, that potions analogy was bad. Great chapter.
Author's Response: A good way to celebrate for all you guys from the States, for sure, so it's a good thing the fourth just happened to be a Thursday. Haha, yeah, I had fun writing a terrible analogy. It isn't often you get a legitimate excuse to butcher something like that! Thanks for reviewing!
Severus with his little speeches was very funny! I just have one question: this chapter seems to wrap up the entire story, and yet you said nothing about it being the end...? I am hoping that this means that there will be more?
Author's Response: It does wrap things up a fair bit, yes, but there are still so many loose ends so no ... this isn't the end. Probably that will come in two to three chapters. Thanks for the review!
LOL...sorry im laughing to hard. I could just picture Severus running after Hermione in his night clothes waving a book and screaming "Your My Anne" Its just a funny picture in my head. But yeah she is staying.
Next is Harry's birthday party.
Author's Response: Haha great to hear you thought it was funny. I intended it to be a little comical in spots so i'm glad you liked it l. Thanks for reviewing.
Poor Severus. He really was stumbling there for a bit. He clearly needed his coffee to help bolster him after the long night. I especially enjoyed Hermione's thoughts at the start of the chapter. The sentence about not feeling winning like Anne just tired and bookish like Hermione struck a cord. Sometimes it would be nice to be as wonderful and lucky as the characters in books. Severus' dream made me laugh. One of those incredibly weird dreams that make sense while you have them but on waking up, you wonder where that came from. Anyway, this is a long review for an enjoyable chapter. Thanks for such a good story.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the lengthy review! I love those ... Haha, great to hear you liked Severus' dream. I thought it would at least spawn a chuckle or two. I am very glad to hear that you enjoyed Hermione's little comment. I think that is a statement true for everyone, at some point. Cheers!
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