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Title: Terror in the Night 08 Feb 2013 2:18 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    As usual, a good chapter. Love how you manage to show both our boys at their most vulnerable, while still making them seem so strong and proud.

    No, I don't think that Snape's temper is going to hold much longer, but I just hope that he doesn't eat Harry for breakfast!

    Author's Response: Haha, Harry's more of an appetizer anyway! Yes, let us hope Snape doesn't eat him, lol. I am glad that you are liking my portrayal of their struggles. It annoys me when people turn Harry or Snape into wimps just because they cannot do something, so I've tried hard to keep them strong and proud, as you said. Thanks for the review Pandora!
Title: Terror in the Night 08 Feb 2013 1:47 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I was loving the part where Harry recieves comfort from Sev, but then when he opens his mouth and ruins it, all I could think was oh Harry lol.

    It was a really good chapter, I really hope Sev will be able to heal. The kind of person he is, he would hate it if he couldn't do what he used too. I can feel his frustrations though, doing something all these years and then not being able too. Its really sad...

    Author's Response:

    Glad you enjoyed the comforting. Yeah, Harry did mess things up a little, didn't he? He's got a talent for complicating things. Thanks so much for the review! Hope it isn't too sad for you! :)

Title: Terror in the Night 08 Feb 2013 1:13 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is being very patient with young Harry. More than I had expected but Severus is vulnerable, too, so he may be feeling some empathy for Harry's plight. I will miss Molly (as I am sure Harry and Snape will) but she does need to return to her family. And now Harry and Severus are forced to interact.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Snape does kind of understand what Harry's going through. The next chapter will take a bit of a walk through Severus' head, allowing the reader to see a little of what he was thinking the previous night.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Terror in the Night 07 Feb 2013 11:05 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww Severus acted like a daddy in away that was so cute. But...

    HARRY WAKE UP YOUR IN THIS WHOLE PROBLEM BECAUSE YOU WILL NOT CRY OVER SIRIUS. CRY YOU IDIOT CRY. It will make you feel better.

    Now that that is out my system it was a good chapter that got the two of them to somewhat understand what the other is going threw.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Yeah, Harry should just cry, but the trouble is, in order to actually grieve properly, he also has to realize it isn't his fault as well, and that takes time. Thanks for the review!
Title: Terror in the Night 07 Feb 2013 10:36 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more. I get the feelings things will be very shaky for a while.

    Author's Response: Shaky indeed! Thanks so much for your review cara-tanaka!
Title: An Understanding 03 Feb 2013 10:28 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter the story is getting better and better thank you

    Author's Response: Glad you are liking it! Thanks for dropping a line.
Title: An Understanding 02 Feb 2013 11:12 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    liked it? Liked it? ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!! Little Harry was simply adorable, in his "openess" with Mrs. Weasley as well as his play. I could picture him in my mind when he had the stuffed lion and the marble jar in his arms. Oh my, I can only say I loved it!
    Severus was brilliant, too, and I felt so sad for him when he thought if anything he said came out wrong.

    Pleeeeaaaase, update very quickly, if your time allows, I can't wait for more Harry-Snape interaction and of course Mrs. Weasley somehow managing to mother both boys.
    Yours happily, Melfis.

    Author's Response: I am so glad you love it! I was anxious for feedback on Severus'  comment to Mrs. Weasley. I have always considered Severus to have trouble expressing himself in words sometimes, so it is nice to know that you appreciated that little scene. Cheers! The next update will be up next week.
Title: An Understanding 01 Feb 2013 12:04 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Mrs weasley is an angel

    Author's Response: Glad you are liking her. Thanks for the review!
Title: An Understanding 01 Feb 2013 5:28 am
Reviewer: Manfredd (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love the scenes between Molly and Harry, and Molly and Severus.

    Author's Response: Thanks Manfredd! I am glad you are liking the interaction with Molly and the othes. I'm just sorry she cannot stay too long. I do love writing her, but the plot must go on ... and unfortunately, Snape and Harry need time alone to figure each other out! Cheers!
Title: An Understanding 01 Feb 2013 3:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry. I imagine that Snape and Harry have much in common now. How sad that Harry doesn`t know what it`s like to be loved, or tucked in, or just to be like a normal child.

    I can`t wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: It is sad for Harry, isn't it?  I can hardly imagine what it must have been like for him. Thinking of how Harry must have grown up really makes me appreciate my family. Thanks so much for the review Pandora!

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