I like this story and it's great Ron isn't a git like usual and gets along with Harry's new guardian :)
I wonder what the toad is up to when she's teaching in Hogwarts and what about Moony? Will he be in this story?
I think Harry is good for Severus and vise versa - they have both to learn how to be a family because they never had the greatest role models...
PLEASE update soon!!!
well now that that subject is out and in the open. Harry did freak out a little too much but what can I say.
I like the way Fred solved the issue. What are big brothers for right. :)
Lets hope they have fun at the seaside and can empty their minds from all the troubles that are swimming around the paper and their heads.
THAT BITCH BETTER NOT BE TEACHING UNTIL BOOK FIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an excellent story
Author's Response: Thank You I'm glad your enjoying it. :D
grr I hate with a capital H HATE Umbridge
Author's Response: Yeah she is a bit of a old cow.
|Title: Chapter 10
||17 Apr 2013 4:06 pm
|Reviewer: 12reader (Anonymous)
Ugh. I hate Umbridge with a passion, though some writers can write her to perfection. Doesn't mean I like her though. Honestly, can't one of our boys just smack the hell out of her one of these days, literally?
Sorry, rant's over. This is very good. The wolf is a wonderful touch, was scared for a moment about a possible werewolf though. *shiver*
Please keep on with this, I am intrigued.
|Title: Chapter 9
||08 Apr 2013 9:28 pm
|Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
You did really good. Please oh please finish the rest of this story. Where is the wolf? Will snape still be Harry's guardian? Does the wolf catch umbridge? Did she hurt the wolf? What happened? Please don't let Marjorie Dursley take Harry. Please
Author's Response: Thank you. I will try and update soon.
There's a lot of grammar and punctuation issues that make the story not enjoyable to read.
And a Muggle sent the claim the the ministry of magic ( that she didn't know exists)...
MORE please SOON!!!