| Title: Chapter 5
| 13 Mar 2013 11:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked it although Severus was a little to OOT for me.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 10 Mar 2013 10:59 pm
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Lovely chapter I liked how you and Dumbledore handled Dudley and the Dursely's thank you
| Title: Chapter 3
| 10 Mar 2013 4:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely fast paced chapter and a little Harry and Severus interaction! what's could be better?
Im so proud of Dudley. I just hope he realizes that I probably will not be living or seeing his parents again after the trial. I hope the modify Mages mememory so she will not be to mad at him or about Harry. I also hope Dudley and Harry keep in touch.
WOW!
great job! i love this fanfic so far, please update soon, i would like to see longer chapters,but that is my only request you are doing great!
Author's Response: Thank you I am working on longer chapters.
So far, I really like your storyline. It's got a lot of really good elements and I really enjoyed reading your story. The only critique I really have is that your grammar is kinda off, but other than that, I really like it! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Excellent, love it, very well written, would love longer chapters, cant wait for more.
Another excellent chapter, I like good Dudley, can't wait to read more.
That was a very good chapter, it seems like it is going to be a very exciting story to read. Great Job.
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