I really hope you come back to this.
Ugh, Ginevra! Talk about AU! I thought it was hilarious that Rowling used an alternate spelling of "Virginia": Virginia - Virgin😂? And yet the girl was a "doorknob" and a fangirl right til the end! I notice *she* didn't spend time researching spells and helping Harry with every task!
while this is not the first story I read on here, I just realized that it is the reason I first made an account, to review it. I really hope you will continue it soon, I've always loved the idea of what if the Dursleys actually did come to the final task and I love the whole trains thing you have going here.
Poor Severus. Having to keep chasing after Harry. I am really enjoying this story. Thank you.
Title: Roommates
| 28 Jan 2021 9:39 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting chapter, is Harry’s train watching a desire to move away from his life?
Please update soon! I love it
Wow, this chapter is amazing thanks for writing!
Title: The Flat In London
| 05 Jan 2021 1:44 pm
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awww, what a reflective chapter. I liked how Harry went to watch the trains so many times. Poor kid.
I'm glad Snape mellowed. He can tell that Harry is depressed and closed off.
I wonder if anything can be done to get Harry to snap out of it or not.
Great chapter. I loved reading it and all the descriptions. It was very vivid. Well done.
Oh, poor, poor Harry! I'm glad he gets to stay at the castle at least. But now everyone knows why. That must be very upsetting.
I loved how Cedric's dad spoke up for Harry and punched Vernon. He was a good dad.
I'm glad Snape is having some compassion for Harry.
Great chapter. The emotions were so vivid, I almost cried over the thought of Cedric too. Well done.
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