| Title: The Flat In London
| 01 Jan 2021 12:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting chapter and explanation, thank you for updating this story it is so good
| Title: The Champion
| 01 Jan 2021 11:52 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very emotional, lump in the throat time, thank you
| Title: The Champion's Task
| 01 Jan 2021 11:46 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Ahh the truth about the Dursley family visit. Very realistic chapter, I loved the part where they talked before the task
| Title: The Champion's Family
| 01 Jan 2021 11:39 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just re-read this again to remind myself of the story. This is such fun and so well written, thank you
Loving this and looking forward to more.
Enjoyable chapter. I agree that Snape might take Harry in but I would expect him to be angry, rather than understanding, of Harry’s repeated disobedience. Still, I like Harry’s response that he wants to be taken somewhere else. I see that statement as very in character.
Author's Response: I agree, and I typically do have Snape be more strict. At this point he's still wary of Harry's state of mind, especially with how the Prophet is slandering him. The trains will play a prominent role in the last 2-3 chapters of the story as we'll see, and we get to see/have a little fun with that disobedience of Harry's in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
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