I liked how Ron sort of summarized the dread of the situation to Fred in this chapter, though I thought that the repetitive use of "bad" was something that could have been handled better.
Besides that, I'm happy you updated! Keep at it!
| Title: Chapter 11
| 31 May 2013 5:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Bueno, por un momento en realidad pensé que iba a morir Harry, y me encanta las cosas como cuando Ron, habla, sí en realidad la brevedad del tiempo transcurrido para la monstruosidad del daño ocurrido.
Gran capítulo, espero a ver cuales serán los efectos colaterales para Harry y al igual que Severus, no puedo quitarme a Nott de la cabeza
| Title: Chapter 10
| 21 May 2013 11:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very well written chapter with a lot of issues raised and dealt with very well
aww Theo didn't make. I never like the Slytherins that much but man that sucks.
Severus kind of became not Severus there for a moment losing his temper and yelling. Now all thoughs parents are going to be freaking out since I am guessing at least 3/4 of the school is dead or close to dying. Man who would have thought an earthquake could do so much damage. You never realize the extent until its happens to you or you read about it.
Liked the fact that Snape put Augusta in line. Want more news on Harry and Neville, though!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 19 May 2013 2:06 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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dang ......more when you can hun thankyou.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 16 May 2013 11:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 9
| 14 May 2013 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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Hurray! Harry and Neville made it to St. Mungos!
I hope Dumbledore finds more of the trapped people.
Yay! They finally got out!
woo hoo the gryffindors are out and just in a nick of time. Lets hope the Ravenclaws are getting out soon too. Its sad how many have died. So much for the future of the wizading world. Its truly sad. At least Harry and Neville are out and are getting looked at. They have a chance.
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