Why you wizards are not doing magic? Albus could have sent a Patronus with magic.
I love the story and look forward to reading more. Hopefully they can find Harry and he isn't too badly injured.
great story so far i look forward to reading more
Well one house down 3 to go and Gryffindors seem to be in the worse shape. Lets hope Ron and the other have found Harry and Severus can help them.
This just keeps getting more and more exciting.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 19 Apr 2013 7:17 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oooo this is bad is mother nature pissed about what umbitch is doing or something else more when you can I love this!
Yikes, suspenseful! Maybe they could fly the Gryffindors out of the tower one by one, or summon brooms up to the tower for them? In someone can get in ... they should be able to get out, assuming another cave-in doesn't happen (eek!). By the way, there were a few spelling errors (tricky ones that word can't catch), like you used creek instead of creak when you were referring to the ceiling making noise. Just thought you might like to know so you can make the next chapter even better. I sense an epic rescue in the future! Looking forward to the next chapter,and good job!
Lots of damage and injuries. No sign of Poppy yet and I'm looking forward to finding out how Severus fared. Hopefully some of the staff will be able to help find injured students and free them.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 18 Apr 2013 10:36 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh wow more of this one too please!
man Hogwarts is in trouble. I'm surprised the towers didn't fall over or crumble to the ground. What about the slytherins they are under ground they must have gotten it bad.
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