interesting im very excited for the story
Oh dear, who is going to rescue the Gryffindors? And Snape, whatever happened to him? And Harry? I guess I'll just have to wait and see! I liked the image of the stairs all fallen in. Must have been pretty high up on the richter scale for the castle to be in such trouble.
Interesting! Maybe I'll have to respond to this challenge too!
Exciting first chapter. It sounds like there was a lot of damage and quite a few injuries. Hopefully Poppy wasn't hurt because she will be needed.
Enjoyed this first chapter can't wait for the rest.
Ooh, interesting. I am so glad someone answered my challenge! And earthquake, yikes! Let's hope they're all alright!
Hogwarts falling down and Umbridge didn't get hit. Fair description of a bad day :)
I am looking forward to reading more
please update soon, this story is already making for a gripping read, i look forward to resding more :) v well written too.
Very exciting opening chapter. I am on the edge, waiting for more.
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