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Title: What Lurks In The Deep 20 Jan 2020 2:09 am
Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) [Report This]
    Just discovered this one from the challenge. Well done. Atmosphere is creepy enough and I want to know what's happening?

    I think it is all tying in nicely together.

    Plus....did the cat survive?!?
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 29 Oct 2018 6:58 am
Reviewer: suzn18 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhh I hope you will continue this story. I think it is very good so far!
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 14 Oct 2016 3:44 am
Reviewer: AngelMoon Girl (Signed) [Report This]
    Noooooooooooo. Why must the story stop there? Oh, I really hope you'll update, despite the three year hiatus. This story is BRILLIANT, and a one of a kind. I've never read another like it. I am loving Snape and Harry braving illness and the elements together, with Snape very slowly coming to realize he might not have known Harry as well as he thought he did... You are superb, a goddess among authors, and I would so love to see your little masterpiece come to its conclusion.
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 08 Jul 2016 12:48 am
Reviewer: phoenixfire2390 (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay Love it its very well written out and I can't it to see if one day its continued
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 29 Aug 2015 1:52 pm
Reviewer: woodyt (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 26 Jul 2015 6:55 am
Reviewer: phoenixfire2390 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it can't wait for the next chapter do you plan on continuing or have you abandoned it.
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 01 Jun 2015 8:49 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I am finding this to be a rather fascinating story, and like how it is progressing thus far. I hope that there will be more.
Title: Breaking The Rules 07 May 2015 4:54 am
Reviewer: Mugiwara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this story for the most part, but Harry's personality reads like he's younger than he's supposed to be... Maybe 12—13

    Author's Response: That is good feedback to have.  Thanks for taking the time to let me know.  I'll have to go back and take a look at it again.  I know he has been very immature about things at this point considdering the things he's done.  I have known teenage boys who have done immature things like that though, even when they are not always immature in other areas of their lives... heh, I've even known grown men to do some pretty immature things.
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 25 Mar 2015 6:12 pm
Reviewer: T.A.S. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good fic, but there is a major plot hole that needs to be covered (other than where all that water came from): Why not just call a house elf? They can teleport within the wards, and across distances. Malfoy, for instance, has some at home... And of the other Slytherins the same is likely. May want to cover that hole.
    Also, communication by patronus. From what has been shown in the books there shouldn't be any hindrance to a patronus travelling through solid substances...

    Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for your review and your concern about the plot.  I've already addressed these issues however both in reveiws and author's notes.  I'll say it again though.  If they were able to snap their fingers and 'poof' all problems were solved, then there would be no story beyond the very first chapter, which is why I haven't had the characters do these things.
Title: What Lurks In The Deep 28 Feb 2015 6:31 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A Kappa. Now we know. An excellent observation that water changes how we perceive our familiar surroundings. Hope Snape is okay, and that he and Harry can find higher ground soon. Surely there have to be stairways leading upward...

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