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Title: Breaking The Rules 23 May 2013 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Johanni93 (Signed) [Report This]
    This fic is awesome!!! I can't wait to read more! Hope you update soon :D
    Cheers~
Title: Breaking The Rules 15 May 2013 10:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought I wouldn't like this chapter but it is very good thank you
Title: Paying By The Hour 15 May 2013 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought it might be the cat that Harry tried to save but the thing is under the water!
Title: Breaking The Rules 13 May 2013 10:03 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dang Well done Draco I know why he is doing it but it take curage to face a fear and he is.well doen more when you can hun thank you.
Title: Breaking The Rules 12 May 2013 9:22 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story.
Title: A Snape Kind Of Night 12 May 2013 8:47 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story.
Title: Paying By The Hour 11 May 2013 11:13 pm
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving the story, and I really don't want to poke holes because it enjoyable as it is, but one thing I don't understand is why they cant use a warming charm to combat the cold and even send a patronus to give their location..?

    Author's Response:

    It's ok, there's really no holes you can poke at this point.  1) A heating charm would be too easy and it doesn't have to exist in a story.  If we use magic to fix everything then there's really nothing to write about.  2) Who's to say that Dumbledore taught his staff how to use a patronus at this point?  The books only say that he came up with this way to use them, but I do not believe it says when he taught his staff or when he came up with it.  Even if Dumbledore did know Snape and Harry's location, there's no guarantee that there's a good way for a human to get to them.  At this point all they know is that there was an airpath large enough to get an inhaler to them.

    3) (Though you didn't ask rusulka7, this is addressing other reviewers questions): They can't get out via floo because Hogwarts isn't connected to the Floo Network.  That's why Dumbledore had to use Fawks to get out when he escaped in his office from Umbridge.

     

    Thanks for your review (and thank you to the rest of the reviewers as well).

Title: Breaking The Rules 11 May 2013 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, JA. I loved Draco's whole attitude about rescuing people, acting as though every little thing irritates him. Now if the adults would just get the acts together and start planning instead of just survuving!
Title: Breaking The Rules 11 May 2013 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Wandacarla (Signed) [Report This]
    Maybe escape by floo in one of the common rooms? This chapters was interesting. Hopefully Draco can find everyone else. And maybe next chapter more Snape and Harry? I can never get enough. Btw fast update! I wish all stories updated that quickly. Hope I see another chapter soon (:
Title: Breaking The Rules 11 May 2013 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Moongrl (Signed) [Report This]
    There is one escape route that would be easily accessible and that would be by floo. Even if the school itself lost all its own floo powder the act of summoning it would likely garner results. I would try to find some way to explain why they won't do this beyond the fact that they don't know anywhere safe since places as far away as kings cross would not likely be flooded over those long distances.

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