Oh my god 🥺
I thought that was it for Percy 🥺
But what’s going to happen with Sirius and Amanda😕
I’ll admit, when I clicked to read this story, I wasn’t expecting anything like this (me being the type of person to expect happy endings and happy almost everything, not people dying left and right)
It’s a good story, but so sad. 😔
But I swear to god, if the twins die, or sev, Minnie, Ron Draco or Harry, Albus, Remus, Sirius and Amanda, I’m going to be pissed. I just hope they don’t 🥺
Because I have a feeling Percys almost dead anyway, Nevilles either going to survive on the broom probably with burns, or hes going to die
Author's Response: I'm so sorry.but out of your long list, Draco dies. It was devastating and I regret everything but after traumatic events one person always slips through the cracks and dies by suicide. I also only read stories with happy endings because the grief that was in the Harry Potter series was too much for me. But this challenge was natural disaster..people die then..and I had no choice. Sev was never in any danger, nor was Harry. Hope you're still with me
I reckon Percys gonna die, either Fred or George might get injured, Neville might wither get on the broom and be safe, or jump For it at the last minute and fall.
Oh my god😨
Author's Response: I know..it got intense fast
| Title: Chapter 20: Coming Together in Times of Sorrow
| 04 Aug 2017 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: maworth1019 (Signed)
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this is such a well done emotional story... crying, scared happy.. wow
| Title: Chapter 20: Coming Together in Times of Sorrow
| 01 Aug 2017 10:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very intense chapter
| Title: Chapter 19: Mourning and Set Backs
| 04 Mar 2016 9:14 pm
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Thank you a good chapter but not happy with all the slang you are using as not British! I can't imagine Bill ever saying yo!
Author's Response: Well, it seemed like something he would say regardless. And given the wide assortment of accents the whole of the UK has, he's bound to have picked up something. It's fanfic so I'm okay with that.
| Title: Chapter 19: Mourning and Set Backs
| 04 Mar 2016 3:10 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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The aftermath of the disaster is so hard for everyone to deal with. I'm glad you're not making things suddenly turn rosy, although it was nice to see a glimmer of hope for the future in Percy's attitude.
Author's Response: I know, evrything is always okay. Thanks for understanding that as alot of people are telling me to save him. In life unforntually not everyone can be saved
| Title: Chapter 19: Mourning and Set Backs
| 03 Mar 2016 6:53 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wooow. This is such a dramatic story. Great emotional writing. Please continue when you feel you can. Thank you for creating and sharing it with us thus far. :)
| Title: Chapter 18: Sometimes Time Doesn't Heal All Wounds
| 03 Mar 2016 6:36 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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So sad. So powerful. Well done.
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