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Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 9:03 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! What an ending. I hope you update soon.

    Author's Response: I will, dont worry
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    stupid Slytherin I thought they were supposed to have brains. They are turning into stupid reckless Gryfindors (not that its bad all the time but in the case oh yeah).
    OMG COME ON what kind of ending is that? That is by far one of the worst cliffhangers I have ever read. I know someone will save her. I mean Wingardium Leviosa or someone will fly by on a broom or something but seriously give Amanda and Harry heart attacks and man if something happens to Amanda Harry will blame himself.

    Author's Response:

    They're only 13, and they don believe a man who their parents all have an issue with. Dont blame the kids, even if they are a bit stupid. But children will be children.

     Worse as in, you didnt like it, or extremely cruel. And i wouldnt be so sure, I used to cater to the readers but now I write for myself so she may or may not live. Her fate has changed twice already and I'm nearly done with the next chapter. Who has time for wingardiium leviosa, when Severus was the only one near them. Chances are hes fighting Harry so the child wont run off the cliff to try to save her. Its out of there hands, all I can say is wait until the next chapter.

Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 3:56 pm
Reviewer: Arashi (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh, those poor Slytherins who hid in the dungeon from Snape. You certainly have a way of showing the family drama, well done. Fred and George going to find Harry then Ron that is bravery not to mention reckless. I love the suspense and can hardly wait to learn the fate of Amanda.

    Author's Response: But their Gryffindors, of course they'll do that. And Ron as Jealous as he was, I always have a soft spot for him. He wont meet Harry on the way, so more drama on the way. I'm glad you like it thought.
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 2:07 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    omg! poor mandy! snape has his wand right tell he has it!

    Author's Response: He has it, but he wont be able to save her.
Title: Chapter 4: Who will Save the Children? 27 Apr 2013 8:26 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Gaaaah! *holds up a pie* She had better not die. I've NEVER left a cliffie like that! 0.0 Still, kudos on a good chapter. And if those Slytherin 3rd years survive, they need a spanking.

    Author's Response: *Hides behind a table* Well youre cliffys have been pretty bad to say the least. lol, they definitly do. She may or may not, we will see next Chapter. lol
Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts will protect us right? 25 Apr 2013 6:34 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh damn that is a horrable way to die more when you can hun thanks
Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts will protect us right? 25 Apr 2013 7:01 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh gosh, I had to wrack my brains to remember what had happened with Harry and Amanda earlier! That's what I get for reading stories during finals ... A bit confusing with the time changes sometimes, but whether that's the story or me I'll never know. I really liked Marcus' concern for his sister, and I like Amanda. She's sweet. Looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts will protect us right? 25 Apr 2013 6:53 am
Reviewer: bianca_slate (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I like the premise: will a natural disaster affect Hogwarts castle. We all know that it will affect the castle's inhabitants.
    I especially liked how the professors kept calm, and how Snape realized that his dungeon domain would be the first affected, if worst came to worst, and advised his Slytherins gather what they wanted to have and be ready to leave at a moment's notice. I approve that he will seal the area after it's evacuated, so no one can get trapped in there. In the unlikelyhood that the castle repels the lava, locking down the dungeons assures the Slytherins that the belongings they don't want to take with them in the emergency will not be left free for the pilfering.
    I look forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts will protect us right? 25 Apr 2013 5:33 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow who would have though Marcus was such a nice big brother. I am also glad that Harry is with her and is trying to help her.
    If the hospital wing is safe from Natural disaster why don't they expand it and place the whole student body in there? Just giving my point of view.

    Author's Response: because i dont think everyone knows that. im sure albus was told once upon a time but his age its possible he forgit. poppy would know because its her domain. i will explain the reasonings i suppose in the next chapter or authors note.
Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts will protect us right? 25 Apr 2013 4:34 am
Reviewer: Lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the story but I am find parts confusing to read. It seems to jump from one time to another. The plot is good and I like the introduction of Amanda. I look forward to the next chapter.

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