Title: Chapter 17: What Hurts the Most is No one Noticed
| 03 Mar 2016 6:19 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh, poor Severus. this is devastating for everyone. Wow, such strong emotions, fantastic expression of them. Powerful chapter. Poor, poor Draco! What a mess of things, so sad. Such a dramatic way for Draco to go. The writing was superb, great descriptions. Thank you so much for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting
Title: Chapter 18: Sometimes Time Doesn't Heal All Wounds
| 18 Dec 2015 5:36 pm
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Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed)
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I feel so sorry for Lucius and Narcissa.
Title: Chapter 18: Sometimes Time Doesn't Heal All Wounds
| 16 Dec 2015 8:34 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very sad but very well written thank you
Title: Chapter 18: Sometimes Time Doesn't Heal All Wounds
| 13 Dec 2015 7:54 pm
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Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed)
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This chapter was beautifully written... when Harry cries out for Draco, it brought a lump to my throat.
Title: Chapter 18: Sometimes Time Doesn't Heal All Wounds
| 13 Dec 2015 7:35 pm
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Brilliant chapter... I need to find a few tissues. I almost did the same thing Malfoy did a few months ago... I knw exactly how it feels and u captured it perfectly, curbing any lingering thoughts of it as well. Thanks
Author's Response: I'm so glad you fought through what you were dealing with. Definitly a strong person and I'm glad you liked my story. I needed tissues when I wrote this bit almost a year ago, it hurt to go back amd add to it. Ao I'm glad I've managed to capture everything I was trying to do. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 17: What Hurts the Most is No one Noticed
| 25 Nov 2015 2:44 pm
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Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed)
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Aw poor Draco :'( and also poor Fred :(
Title: Chapter 17: What Hurts the Most is No one Noticed
| 23 Nov 2015 7:15 pm
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Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Sad that Draco slipped through the net, but believable. I look forward to seeing how the characters deal with the fallout from this on top of everything else.
Title: Chapter 17: What Hurts the Most is No one Noticed
| 22 Nov 2015 8:27 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A very sad chapter thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 17: What Hurts the Most is No one Noticed
| 21 Nov 2015 5:38 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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honestly, i wish you would have chosen differently. made a failed attempt or whatever. kudos for the story in general,but this was a bit much for me.
Author's Response: Iknow, it was a bit much for me too. I understand.
Title: Chapter 17: What Hurts the Most is No one Noticed
| 20 Nov 2015 8:29 pm
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Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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very emotional for me but well done
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