I really really like this fic. It isn't too fast; everything's not solved in a day. Harry is a 13 year old and acts like it. Snape is very Snape-like. All in all, it is well done and I really hope you come back to finish it someday.
I have come to the conclusion that my anxiety makes it incredibly difficult to read through a high-stress situation without taking breaks and building myself up to it. When Harry dropped the basket of potions, I had to go on a walk and chill, my anxiety was reacting to his. I think I might have a problem.
In generall really good, I enjoyed reading it. I think it would be even better, if there was more direct talk about their past between Harry and Snape, but that us my personal opinion. Please continue
This is such a great story! with a unique plot, I love your writing and the fact that you care to ask for your reviewers' opinions on how to go about things :)! I would love to so more chapters, any plan to continue?
I honestly can't say I love this story but it is really interesting and I do like your plot; your characters have definitely gained depth as the story went on. There are several grammar/spelling mistakes throughout that I think a beta would help you with a lot but overall it is a good story
Lily is really annoying, I mean she messed up and Snape is an arse but somehow it's Harry's responsibility to forgive and be patient? It's as bad as Dumbledore making an 11-17 year old boy fight a 60+ (don't really know how old Voldemort is) dark lord and die on top of it. Harry doesn't owe either of them anything
I think it would suck if Snape and Ian weren't punished for how they treat Harry. Whether or not they find out the truth, they've still been hurting him
Snape is such an idiot. Why in all the world would Harry know what your son looks like before he even gets to school and then want to show up looking like him?! I hope Harry tells him to go float hisself when he realizes the truth
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