I am going to be adding it to my favorites and I loved your story very much. I would love a sequel and see if Ginny becomes a Snape :P But I agree that it was a good ending if you decide to not do a sequel (no matter how much I want one) *hint hint*
Oh, good one with Draco and Lucius. I like Lucius' parents a lot! Very nice re-sorting scenes too! I rarely see a good-Tobias fic and this was very well-done. Hope to see another fic of yours soon, you're good!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the high praise. I have a few fics in progress that have a snape/harry dynamic, but 2 dramione complete and 1 wrong BWL in progress.
| Title: New Boy
| 03 Jun 2013 6:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Me has dado dudas sobre Henry además de que me sorprendió el recurso de Ginny además de la casa en la que quedo sorteada.
Pero fue un gran capítulo, en especial la confrontación con Draco y la presentación de los más viejos Malfoy
The hell!? Crazy deluded old coot! Oooh, I would vote for Azkaban too but it's your story and he's being punished, so ok.
LOVED that Tobias got to scream at Albus and Harry put James in his place (the nerve of him, after everything!) Nice touching scene with the amulets too. Now I'm wondering how Hogwarts will receive Alex now! Ooh, I hope Alex gets to stand up for himself somehow once he gets back. Later!
| Title: Trials
| 03 Jun 2013 12:35 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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Ooh! Dumbledore not getting sent to Azkaban will result in attempted retribution, once he, Alex(Harry) and Severus are all back at Hogwarts, I'm sure! I wonder how the staff will side - with Dumbledore or the Snapes.
I'm enjoying your story!
Please don't worry when I don't post next week, if you post another chapter. I have to take a week and visit my aged uncle - who is so old he barely believes in having indoor toilets and running water!
| Title: Trials
| 02 Jun 2013 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Impresionante juicio!!!
Me encanto la sentencia de James, además de que la parte de Lily fue increíble tanto la admisión de sus crímenes como la condena que le dieron por cómplice
Y por supuesto es sorprendente la condena de Dumbledore, pero muero de ganas por ver como continua tu historia
i wonder why DD was so intent on fostering hatred. We found out why he kidnapped alex, but not the reason for wanting hatred. i'm really enjoying this story, very unique. will alex be resorted? I can't imagine he'd want to be a part of a house with Henry potter and the representation of his original mistake of choosing Gryffindor in order to gain approval of the potters. Personally I think the sentences were too light, in particular lily potter. She should loose custody of Henry. and shouldn't sirius, remus and all others that knew the truth be tried as accessories?
I think it should have been more for Dumbledore. Who cares if he is too old let him rot in prison. Lets hope that Henry doesn't take it out on Alex of course Severus will be there to stop anything bad happening to his baby brother.
Oh and please tell me that Alex will be resorted into Slytherin please oh please.
| Title: Trials
| 02 Jun 2013 10:54 pm
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| Reviewer: phoenixsong (Anonymous)
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This is a wonderful story! I enjoy reading it very much. You are a very good writer. I hope you write more stories whenever you finish this one.
Well, that answered the questions of whether Lily knew what was going on and why Dumbledore kidnapped Harry. I am still a little confused though about why Dumbledore wanted the dark families to remain dark after the war.
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