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Reviews For For Valour
Title: S.T. Snape 23 Oct 2013 6:54 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Talk about the plot thickening... And a Victoria Cross to boot! But poor Snape-- being caught that far off balance just because Harry had to check up on beetle wings. I'm cringing as much as Harry is at this point, not really certain I want to hear it all, but knowing that I need to, in order to understand.

    Author's Response: Ah yes, that plot is bubbling away into a nice, thick gravy (my secret is corn starch). Yes, it doesn't bode well, does it? What follows definitely isn't happy in places, that's for sure, but every bad thing has its good parts ... Thanks for reviewing! ;)
Title: S.T. Snape 21 Aug 2013 11:54 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I put off commenting till you'd got another chapter up as I wasn't quite sure if I'd like this. Still not sure, but I'm definitely interested! I've always found things written in the present tense a bit odd and awkward to read, but I can understand that you might want to challenge yourself with a different style, and who knows - you might yet change my mind.

    Author's Response: Hello rosina! Yeah, For Valour is really not the typical story, so I totally get that you're on the fence. And yeah, present tense can be awkward. But you got it right on why I chose it! I was booorrred. I wanted to try something noew, and I like what it does for this story. Hopefully that won't be too distracting if you do decide to jump aboard for sure! Thanks so much for reviewing despite your reservations! ;)
Title: S.T. Snape 21 Aug 2013 4:27 am
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't wait to see what happens! I'm so happy you decided to post this story; it seems like it will be a very moving story.

    Author's Response: Hey Emily - thank you so much for your review! I am glad you are enjoying it so much. Cheers!
Title: S.T. Snape 20 Aug 2013 1:39 pm
Reviewer: Annora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi,
    Lucky for Harry that Severus seems to be a supportive and understanding father, else he would be in great trouble. Although I still think a mild parental lecture is warranted for invading his father’s privacy, not to mention sharing the information learned with Hermione. But then again, perhaps learning the truth (or most of it) may lead to a deeper understanding and result in a lesson learned, so there’s no further lecture needed. (But that’s just me rambling, I hope you don’t mind.)
    Anyway, great chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It also got me pondering how much – quite contrary to canon – Severus would hate it to be called brave. I can’t imagine the amount of pain the Victoria Cross evokes along with all the cruelties of war, but I also can’t wait for you to keep unfolding them.
    Well, it’ll be an agonizing week till your next update. :)

    Author's Response: Hello Annora! Hmm, yes, a reprimand would have been good. I admit I did not think to throw that in - I was so focused on the story! Glad to hear you enjoyed it! Yeah, war medals are such a mixed back. Some want them, others want nothing to do with them, or at least from people I've talked to. Cheers!
Title: S.T. Snape 20 Aug 2013 4:39 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!

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